|Reviews for London Calling (London Calling, 1)|
| xPencilsCamerasx chapter 28 . 1/19
A novice writer? Pah!
| thesakifan chapter 57 . 10/21/2014
Geez, Elliot is behaving as if bobby is the queen and i think i now know when he fell inlove with her...
THE MOMENT HE SET EYES ON HER! IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!
| gyoung chapter 54 . 10/7/2014
I want to sob and cry because it is the end. For a moment, I felt like I could not breathe! I loved your story. Wonderful. I love, love, love Elliot. I am so fangirling right now even though it's midnight and I should be going to sleep...Whateves. I just want to say thank you. This is the first story I have read in fictionpress and I am so happy to have chosen this one to begin.
| gyoung chapter 22 . 10/6/2014
She dressed up as a bumblebee and all the other girls in slutty oufits? It killed me. I can't stop laughing! Hilarious.
| gyoung chapter 17 . 10/6/2014
So, I started reading this during chemistry class. Two words: LOVING IT. I could not stop reading for almost two hours straight. I just came back to my dorm room to read. And, I kind off have a crush on Elliot already. I am not in denial unlike Bobby; however, I want to know more about him, because right now my crush is based on how good-looking he is in my head. Hahaha
| Chido chapter 28 . 10/5/2014
out of immensely enjoying the story
| Lady chapter 56 . 9/28/2014
You know... you should publish it because it's WONDERFUL, FUNNY, AMAZING, LOVEABLE AND ALL SORTS OF AWESOME ! I would definitely buy it if it was to be published. Love this story to bits.
| maxiluc4ever chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
Hey there! I just finished reading this and it was awesome blossom! I loved Elliot and Bobby's chemistry :)
| Mistrelia of the Ice chapter 34 . 9/20/2014
OOOOOOOOOOOOH, bitch, I see what you did there! He called her beautiful! And...did he just seriously ask her the fuck out? Honestly honey, your story keeps making me laugh, smile, and squeal with happiness for the two.
SORRY! I'm reading your story for the second time and completely forgot I left this review just sitting here since I never sent it in. Anyway, here's my opinion of this chapter, haha.
| Mistrelia of the Ice chapter 54 . 9/19/2014
Oh shit. He's gonna meet the family. And now you're making me wanna adopt a cheetah XD Hahaha! I wanna dad like hers! A collection of brass knuckles, that is awesome. Also, I'm super glad with her mom being okay about the whole 'living together' thing too. If it were me I'd be super concerned about my daughter, but if I saw that kind of love, I'd be happy for her and trust her too. Oh, and is it kinda weird that I was hoping for a little bit of envy on Andrew's part? Call me mean, but I thought it would be fun.
What an asshole. I thought he was gonna propose too...
THE END? AWW! IT'S TOO SOON! I DEMAND SOME FORM OF SEQUAL OR SOMETHING EQUALLY WONDERFUL! MAYBE ABOUT THE LIVES OF THEIR FRIENDS OR HIS SISTER FINDING LOVE OR SOMETHING! YOU. ARE. THE. BEST!
But seriously, thank you so, so, so much! I am so grateful for you for writing this story. It was wonderful, touching, heartfelt, funny, and made me cry. It was amazingness rolled up into a not long enough story with a perfect ending. If it weren't creepy I would send you a billion Christmas gifts just to attempt to show my appreciation. But anyway, I just can't get over it. This was a truly perfect story. I wish you all the happiness in the world and would look forward to reading quite literally anything else you have to write, even if it was on a sticky note, haha.
From a fan who truly appreciates your existence...thank you 3
| Mistrelia of the Ice chapter 53 . 9/19/2014
ELLIOT WAS HIS NAME? I may just vomit. I seriously want to vomit. I don't even wanna read on if he's dead. Or anyone else for that matter. Don't let me down Dreamer...
HE'S ALIVE! THEY'RE ALIVE! THEY MADE IT! YAAAAY! THANK GOD! Seriously, my heart would not be able to take it if something happened to ANY of them. I was reading a manga called Kitchen Princess and it was happy and lovely. The story was great and love and happiness were in the air. It was beautiful...AND THEN THE BOY DIED AND THE GIRL WAS HATED AND EVERYTHING FELL APART AND MORE DEATH AND SADNESS AND UNHAPPINESS AND JUST...Seriously, I had to physically be consoled. I get so emotionally attached which is why I only read happy stories, so nothing strikes fear into my heart more when I read something that's supposed to be happy only for it to turn tragic. Thank you! Thank you so much for creating a wonderful story with characters who've captured my heart completely! Now just don't scare me anymore!
| Mistrelia of the Ice chapter 52 . 9/19/2014
NOOOO! I'm not done reading but don't let anybody die please! I love all of them! I wanna keep reading but DON'T LET Z DIE!
NO! FUCK YOU! I'M GLAD ABOUT Z BUT WHAT ABOUT THE OTHERS? AND ELLIOT!? GOOD JOB MADAM! I AM NOW CRYING LIKE A CHILD!
| Mistrelia of the Ice chapter 51 . 9/19/2014
Oh boo. I don't like her thinking about breaking up with him due to the long distance. They're perfect for each other. And hell, he hardly likes his family life. When you graduate, just have him move to the states. He'd sure be happier with her and her family in my opinion. Ha, foodgasm. I use a similar phrase. Mine is 'This tastes like an amazing orgasmic experience'. Oh shit. She's inviting that prick? Honestly, if he keeps up the crap, my car running over his dad will suddenly appear in your story...Yay! His dad isn't being much of an asshole anymore! And love is in the air!
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT!? WHAT DID I SAY? WHAT DID I SERIOUSLY JUST SAY IN THE LAST REVIEW! ARE YOU FUCKING ME? A FIRE!? If one of them dies I swear to god missy, a very angry review will follow. I'm already trying like an idiot not to cry!
| Mistrelia of the Ice chapter 50 . 9/19/2014
As much as I love Bobby, I still cannot fathom how a person can possibly fuck up cooking. Also, I don't get why she's so awkward about living with him. Honey, just give in :)
YAY FOR SLEEPING TOGETHER! Not gonna lie, you're giving me ideas to use for ways I can pull an Elisa so I can create cute, awkward moments for my friends and their loves. Also, I'm really glad she said she loved him. I was getting worried that you were gonna do something to like, endanger one of their lives and make her regret never saying it. But yay for love!
| Mistrelia of the Ice chapter 49 . 9/19/2014
That first sentence and the whole entire paragraph to Mr. Simmons proves Elisa and I are twins XD I also love how much she smacks around her brother. I personally pride myself on karate chopping one of my friends in the throat repeatedly. And aww, poor Max. I kinda feel bad for him. It'd be nice to think he found a cute girlfriend too. Not Bobby though, haha. Also, they're texts are freaking cute as fuck. Unfortunately though, it's a shame she hasn't responded to Elliot. I handle the words 'I love you' with care too, but when I feel them, it's nearly impossible to hold them in.