Beautiful! I loved the humour, romance, and suspense in your story. Definitely one of the best reads here. Thank you so much for sharing it with us :)

I love this story!

great story!

I'd never walk away from Chris Evans!
That was hilarious

A novice writer? Pah!

Geez, Elliot is behaving as if bobby is the queen and i think i now know when he fell inlove with her...

THE MOMENT HE SET EYES ON HER! IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!

I want to sob and cry because it is the end. For a moment, I felt like I could not breathe! I loved your story. Wonderful. I love, love, love Elliot. I am so fangirling right now even though it's midnight and I should be going to sleep...Whateves. I just want to say thank you. This is the first story I have read in fictionpress and I am so happy to have chosen this one to begin.

She dressed up as a bumblebee and all the other girls in slutty oufits? It killed me. I can't stop laughing! Hilarious.

So, I started reading this during chemistry class. Two words: LOVING IT. I could not stop reading for almost two hours straight. I just came back to my dorm room to read. And, I kind off have a crush on Elliot already. I am not in denial unlike Bobby; however, I want to know more about him, because right now my crush is based on how good-looking he is in my head. Hahaha

out of immensely enjoying the story

You know... you should publish it because it's WONDERFUL, FUNNY, AMAZING, LOVEABLE AND ALL SORTS OF AWESOME ! I would definitely buy it if it was to be published. Love this story to bits.

Hey there! I just finished reading this and it was awesome blossom! I loved Elliot and Bobby's chemistry :)

OOOOOOOOOOOOH, bitch, I see what you did there! He called her beautiful! And...did he just seriously ask her the fuck out? Honestly honey, your story keeps making me laugh, smile, and squeal with happiness for the two.

SORRY! I'm reading your story for the second time and completely forgot I left this review just sitting here since I never sent it in. Anyway, here's my opinion of this chapter, haha.

Oh shit. He's gonna meet the family. And now you're making me wanna adopt a cheetah XD Hahaha! I wanna dad like hers! A collection of brass knuckles, that is awesome. Also, I'm super glad with her mom being okay about the whole 'living together' thing too. If it were me I'd be super concerned about my daughter, but if I saw that kind of love, I'd be happy for her and trust her too. Oh, and is it kinda weird that I was hoping for a little bit of envy on Andrew's part? Call me mean, but I thought it would be fun.

What an asshole. I thought he was gonna propose too...

THE END? AWW! IT'S TOO SOON! I DEMAND SOME FORM OF SEQUAL OR SOMETHING EQUALLY WONDERFUL! MAYBE ABOUT THE LIVES OF THEIR FRIENDS OR HIS SISTER FINDING LOVE OR SOMETHING! YOU. ARE. THE. BEST!

But seriously, thank you so, so, so much! I am so grateful for you for writing this story. It was wonderful, touching, heartfelt, funny, and made me cry. It was amazingness rolled up into a not long enough story with a perfect ending. If it weren't creepy I would send you a billion Christmas gifts just to attempt to show my appreciation. But anyway, I just can't get over it. This was a truly perfect story. I wish you all the happiness in the world and would look forward to reading quite literally anything else you have to write, even if it was on a sticky note, haha.

From a fan who truly appreciates your existence...thank you 3

ELLIOT WAS HIS NAME? I may just vomit. I seriously want to vomit. I don't even wanna read on if he's dead. Or anyone else for that matter. Don't let me down Dreamer...

HE'S ALIVE! THEY'RE ALIVE! THEY MADE IT! YAAAAY! THANK GOD! Seriously, my heart would not be able to take it if something happened to ANY of them. I was reading a manga called Kitchen Princess and it was happy and lovely. The story was great and love and happiness were in the air. It was beautiful...AND THEN THE BOY DIED AND THE GIRL WAS HATED AND EVERYTHING FELL APART AND MORE DEATH AND SADNESS AND UNHAPPINESS AND JUST...Seriously, I had to physically be consoled. I get so emotionally attached which is why I only read happy stories, so nothing strikes fear into my heart more when I read something that's supposed to be happy only for it to turn tragic. Thank you! Thank you so much for creating a wonderful story with characters who've captured my heart completely! Now just don't scare me anymore!