Reviews for Taming an Alpha |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the story so far. The build up is going at a good pace. Can't wait for her reactions and to see how he plans on handling this human. I'm loving the characters so far. |
![]() ![]() I like that you are giving us both points of view. I am glad that he seems to be wild with her and so buttoned down with his fiancé. Thank you for posting so quickly. I am really enjoying your story |
![]() ![]() Whoa! Powerful start. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for posting |
![]() ![]() he's coming on way to strong he needs to back off. She needs to stick the knife she has where the sun don't shine, if he doesn't give her room to breath, she needs to show him she is no push over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish the chapters were longer, but I like that you are updating so quickly. There was one mistake I found, you wrote "he released his wrist," instead of "he released her wrist." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am glad you are writing Nicholai's point of view as well. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if part of the reason Emma had a hard time being accepted by the other kitchen staff isn't because she's female, but because she is human. Anyways update soon please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I wonder why he has to be tamed? Is Dimirti too aggressive or does it have to do with his wolf? Update soon & happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. Liking Nichola a lot he sounds very sexy. Looking forward for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg this is amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am very interest in this story. I hope you update soon. I am curious, is everyone at the restaurant a werewolf or at least know about werewolves? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! Though some wuestions were left unanswered, to me anyways: What is his name? Why was he at the restraunt? How did she not know her co-workers were werewolves? Is she the only human that works there? How did he know she was his mate? Update soon & happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very intriguing. I don't know if you meant for the chapter to be one long paragraph or maybe you're having trouble with the formatting. Definitely want to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool beginning and set up. Appears she's the only human in the kitchen. I would say that you need to break up your story as it was one long paragraph. |