Reviews for Fragments
dgreenbean chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
This is a well-written and well-developed story for less than 1,000 words! I specifically liked how some chapters were one or two short sentences, while others were several paragraphs, as well as how the death of the girl was introduced at the beginning of Chapter 8. It had me captivated the only time. The only criticism I would have is for proofreading. I'm pretty sure it was Chapter 7 (6 maybe?) where the text became incoherent for a paragraph or two, but besides that, it was all great. Enjoyed reading this!