|Reviews for Sky|
| First-Chair-Flute chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
Not bad, desriptive.
The lines are longer then I would have had them but that is personal preferance
| saber-toothed jellybean chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
hm... well- I like it! :-) lol! It actually looks like the type of petry I write! Nice metaphors. heh- you like that word 'imbued' dontchya! lol.
| IsaByrd chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
The idea is cliched, but the poem suprisingly is not. It could have been longer and all, but I really liked it. Good. :)
| da opium chapter 1 . 6/23/2001
FINALLY, a non-dark poem, well done Wome. U'v finally broken the trend! _
| w. a. monaghan chapter 1 . 6/18/2001
Hn, I've noticied you use a lot of imagery in your poetry, and this one is just chock full of it.. my head hurts. Try to use other writing techniques, shibby poem though. Luv it. _~
| MidnightBlaze chapter 1 . 6/15/2001
I like this. You're right, it's not dark, but does one genre determine the quality of a writer? Are we forced to be in little molds? I think not...
Peace through darkness