Reviews for Torment |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There's so many mystery surrounding this story. Makes me curious |
![]() ![]() to see what happens next. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh WOW. I hate to waste the one review allowed on this word but I am just left thinking WOW. Poor Eric. I know I should be on team Eric but I can't help myself Team Trevor all the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmm I can't wait to find out more about Trevor's background. I am proud of Ariana for having the last word...though I think she was a bit petty. Can't really blame her though after how Trevor, has maligned her character, mistreated for so long and now currently seems to just objectify her. I suspect that his feelings are deeper but he just doesn't have the emotional literacy to appropriately conduct himself. Well another great chapter. Thanks for sharing your talent |
![]() ![]() ain't the only thing steamy. Another job well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Tom. I completely respect him for his decision. Good boy! I'm anticipating the next installment! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is so great! can't wait until the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa Another great chapter and early too :o) I have an exam tomorrow but this was a nice respite from study XOXOOX |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a perturbing turn of events. I am intrigued and slightly pained for Trevor. I appreciate that you give you write such layered characters. That kid is carrying a lot of pain. Well done conveying that and make an antipathetic character sympathetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the plot is starting to thicken now that sum of trevor's issues are coming to light! great chapter and thank u SOOOOO much for the fast updates |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving it so far! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story! I got hooked on it right away. When I saw the title I was like this sounds intersting, then I read the summary and I was like this must be good, and finally I read the chapters and I was like woahhhhh I need more . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let's get digging! I want to know what is beneath the surface. I applaud Ariana's social adroitness. My fingers are crossed that her and Eric's friendship will stay strong. Once again thanks for sharing your talent :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOOOSSHH! this is so frustrating, Ariana has TWO nice guys around her, yet I have a strong feeling that Trevor is gonna ruin it because of his attraction (more like obsession) to her! |
![]() ![]() Love it! Trevor seems a total ass and I hope he gets his comeuppance! Please update soon X |