Reviews for Torment
Edna-Mode413 chapter 5 . 4/13/2014
There's so many mystery surrounding this story. Makes me curious
Can'tWait chapter 8 . 4/13/2014
to see what happens next.
Keep up the good work!
KarasunoFan chapter 8 . 4/13/2014
Oh WOW. I hate to waste the one review allowed on this word but I am just left thinking WOW. Poor Eric. I know I should be on team Eric but I can't help myself Team Trevor all the way.
KarasunoFan chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
Hmmmm
I can't wait to find out more about Trevor's background. I am proud of Ariana for having the last word...though I think she was a bit petty. Can't really blame her though after how Trevor, has maligned her character, mistreated for so long and now currently seems to just objectify her. I suspect that his feelings are deeper but he just doesn't have the emotional literacy to appropriately conduct himself.
Well another great chapter. Thanks for sharing your talent
Summer chapter 7 . 4/11/2014
ain't the only thing steamy. Another job well done!
DazzLing xD chapter 6 . 4/11/2014
Oh Tom. I completely respect him for his decision. Good boy! I'm anticipating the next installment! :)
SunnySideUp26 chapter 6 . 4/10/2014
this story is so great! can't wait until the next chapter
KarasunoFan chapter 6 . 4/10/2014
Whoa
Another great chapter and early too :o)
I have an exam tomorrow but this was a nice respite from study
XOXOOX
KarasunoFan chapter 5 . 4/6/2014
This is a perturbing turn of events. I am intrigued and slightly pained for Trevor. I appreciate that you give you write such layered characters. That kid is carrying a lot of pain. Well done conveying that and make an antipathetic character sympathetic.
justfine92 chapter 5 . 4/6/2014
the plot is starting to thicken now that sum of trevor's issues are coming to light! great chapter and thank u SOOOOO much for the fast updates
AmorLorna chapter 4 . 4/5/2014
Loving it so far! Can't wait for more!
tootalltoobetrue chapter 4 . 4/5/2014
I love your story! I got hooked on it right away. When I saw the title I was like this sounds intersting, then I read the summary and I was like this must be good, and finally I read the chapters and I was like woahhhhh I need more .
KarasunoFan chapter 4 . 4/5/2014
Let's get digging! I want to know what is beneath the surface. I applaud Ariana's social adroitness. My fingers are crossed that her and Eric's friendship will stay strong.
Once again thanks for sharing your talent :o)
justfine92 chapter 4 . 4/5/2014
GOOOSSHH! this is so frustrating, Ariana has TWO nice guys around her, yet I have a strong feeling that Trevor is gonna ruin it because of his attraction (more like obsession) to her!
Nikki chapter 3 . 4/3/2014
Love it! Trevor seems a total ass and I hope he gets his comeuppance! Please update soon X
176 | « Prev Page 1 .. 8 9 10 11 12 Next »