I hate ur story .I'm dissaponted :(
Ariana is a bitch -,- poor trevor :((
Not a happy ending .dont want to read this story anymore.

You're still the best more or less,I guess,I know

Though I wish the story wasn't over, I think you wrote the ending really well. I was thrilled to read about Ariana's family, and about Nicole and Tom, as well. I also like how you mentioned all the prominent characters in the story, including Denise and Eric. While I do wish Trevor would have gotten better, I applaud you for keeping it realistic until the end; it must have been hard not to tie it up with a bow and write a happy ending. And though Trevor clearly hadn't changed much by the time he tracked Ariana down, I personally think it shows even the slightest bit of maturity that he didn't at least threaten her and her family - but that could just be my remaining sympathy for him. It was tragic what happened to him because of his horrible life growing up, but I do think it probably isn't that uncommon in real life. He had a serious mental condition, and even the idea of having a wife and a baby couldn't make him happy. Like I've said before, you wrote this story really well, and I enjoyed it even though it was darker than your other stories. I can't wait to read more from you :)

wow all those years
And the death of Trevor
I am still in shock oh wow
beautiful story, totally unexpected ending

Ahhhhhhh ahhhhhhh ! I'm torn ! Trevorrrrrrr ! I kinda expected it to end this way but I still had hope . The ending was very satisfying though and I really love your story so much . I can't wait to read more of your stories and thanks so much for posting this :D

OH MY GOODNESS THE END IS NEAR!
I feel a bit sad. I thought there'd be more details about Italy. Toscana is very pretty (from what I see in pictures and Assassin's Creed haha). I think that if Trevor would meet (or hurt) Alessandro, Alessandro would have no problem :)

I really enjoyed this last chapter. I think it fits the story. We usually think we will get a fairytale ending from Romance books, but I guess this one was not meant to have one.

I really like how you write, and i hope i see more of you here.

Whoa mama. Alessandro man... I enjoy him. He's a cool dude. I just pray to GOD Trevor doesn't hurt him. I really loved this chapter, thank you for it! I'm sad this is almost over, but you'll right more stories right? RIGHT?

Eppppp

Bravo!

Alessandro appeared in this one chapter, but he is the light of this story, I love him.
I'm happy this wasn't the last chapter, I get to read another one, so yay! :)
Thanks for writing this )

Finally! I have been waiting for so long for one of your updates. I was going crazy. Cant wait for the final chapter.

I've only read the first chapter so far, but I love this. The hilarious thing is I'm tall, kinda overweight, and named Arianna. Haha. She's even my age.
I thought this story was about me ;)
Nice job! :)

Second last...chapter? I'm crying,why!well I'd just like you to know that this was the best story I have ever read on this had me feeling all sorts of emotions ;happy,sad,confused,exited or all of those things in are an amazing author and I cannot stress how in love I am with it and I'll be sure to re-read it over and over like I would do with stories on you soooooooo much,honestly you have no idea how sincere this is,I'm STILL you
Love,
Nizzy

Don't worry you definetly did nt disappoint me ! I didn't want her to be with Trevor he's pretty ominous . I can't wait to see what happens after this ! I'm glad she's happy now but I'm still scared for her :/ . Please pretty pretty please update soon !