|Reviews for Trinity Core:Story of Us|
| Orange Liger chapter 4 . 7/1/2014
You have a dude seeking revenge on his brother and a dude looking for his sister...yep craziness is gonna ensue luv this chapter
| Orange Liger chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
This has potential I mean a lot impressed by the emotion gives power aspect I'll continue reading the rest later still on bringers anyway check out some of my stories pls review as well
| 360pages chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Hmm, this reads more like a screen play than an actually story, I'd change that slightly, plus the plot seemed to move rather fast without much of a description of what is going on.
It is somewhat difficult to understand the situation without a small reminder every once in awhile on where the characters are.