|Reviews for His Love|
| John-the-H-is-silent chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
The emotion is really flowing in this one.. it's a strong poem. I had to read it twice. Great writing style here. I love when you write like this.
| GoodKnight chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Love- nothing like it, comin or goin.
Her face beautiful in the sky guides the sun’s beaming
to ignite smiles, loving thoughts, and fanciful visions.
Whispers pierce me still as I hug a cloud
‘til it vanishes into the wind that brought it to me
and blows this vision into tomorrow for each day to seek anew.