|Reviews for Shadows|
| GoodKnight chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
My True Event- me19 yrs, a 100 years ago.
2am, just me, the stars, and God on a clear night.
I stood on a cliff far above a beach
contemplating my perceived loss of love.
My heart thumping HARD
with weak knees and short breath.
What did I do wrong?
I wanted it to work sooo much.
I projected and saw what I wanted
not what was really there.
I smiled of this discerning.
Then sailed as a gull diving for fish
into the shadowed sands below.
The soft caress of a dune swallowed me whole.
Moral- Learn what not to do.