Reviews for Blur
Awesomeness in one Author chapter 8 . 10/28/2014
Can't wait for you to continue this, it's really good :D
Aquade chapter 7 . 8/26/2014
Wow. And now the sister comes to view! Great! And the next hour free! Yay!
Aquade chapter 6 . 5/28/2014
So he rescued Embyre! Great! But did his friend escape?
Aquade chapter 5 . 5/14/2014
This story is really picking up pace! I find it slightly weird that he just rushed into the HQ without preparing himself again as he is still rusty with his skills. But I guess that you need to finish the story soon for your teacher, so it makes sense.
Aquade chapter 4 . 5/6/2014
Ooh! Things are going along interestingly! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Aquade chapter 3 . 4/29/2014
Thanks for the update! Looks like there's another character now. Shida is like a friendemy (friend/enemy) to Dante. I hope their relationship doesn't turn rocky.
Aquade chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
For the end of chapter one:
Looks like Fate decided for them to meet again. And what is his name as school? Dante?

For Chapter Two:
So she doesn't recognize him. All the boys are love-struck over her, and she is still facing that fact with distaste, huh? He almost gave away who he was when he said that she was a supervisor. Luckily, he covered it up.

Is he much different in appearance? I wonder why she doesn't recognize him? Maybe it's because the last time she saw him, he was wearing his assassin clothing.

Who is the lone figure on the roof? Both of them are in danger now. They need to step it up...
Needless chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
Another exciting chapter :)
Needless chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Nice descriptions! This is kind of like a junior Assassin's Creed :)
Aquade chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
This incomplete chapter has already drawn me into the book!

Will they meet each other again one day, or is this just a one time thing?

They might be mad at Delta when he returns having not accomplished the mission, though...
omega1012 chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
i like it! Seems a bit cliche but im sure youll twist it somehow