Reviews for PV2 - Paris Redux |
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Caliscity chapter 21 . 5/3/2014 this was definitely a rated M chappie. Still I am totally enjoying this. |
Caliscity chapter 17 . 5/3/2014 I have one complaint. STOP MAKING ME GOOGLE STUFF! |
Caliscity chapter 11 . 5/3/2014 first review from me! Favorite fight scene huh? Angie VS Katrina |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 21 . 5/1/2014 Wow. Good thing I decided to skip school today. Otherwise, I wouldn't have been able to read this until eight hours later. O: You mean this is not the uncut version? You mean there is MORE!? LOL. XD I have to see this. Off to Mibba. |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 20 . 5/1/2014 Uh Oh! Father Knows! That chapter was also Great for a second there though you had me panicing that Gabriel was going to sacrifice himself for Angie, Awww They both said it and it was very Romantic even in the situation they where in, But what happened to waiting until they got home? I love Smut in a story don't get me wrong but in this story I wouldn't mind if they waited until after Father was taken care off but when they where still in Paris, being as its the city of Love and all that much better for ther first time than back home! I'm so Invested in this story now Its not just about these 2 anymore (Not that I don't absoloutly Love these too) I want to know more about all your characters too, I really hope you don't stop wrighting about these 2 when they are finaly together, Not with how great your other characters are as well, So long as Gab/Ang are in the storys I would love to read books on the other's Troubles/H.E.A too! |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 19 . 5/1/2014 That chapter was Epic, I thought the last chapter was great but this chapter was by far much better, I don't even know where to begin? Half way down i was already blown away and the ending Wow! Perfect! I'm not even sure I'm ready to read the next chapter yet! This is so Intense and Exciting, I feel sorry for the people who read this in the future and miss out on the excitment of having to wait a little while for the update! I don't even know what to comment on that chapter was Amazing your getting Better at writing all the time! Wow I'm actualy shaking! That was by far your best chapter! I can't imagine whats going to come next now! Your storys are much Better M-Rated! ThankYou for sharing! |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 18 . 5/1/2014 She would be perfect for Kieran! Wow Demitri has Balls! I can't believe he has turned up at the auction, Thats what i Love about his character he is totaly Crazy! I dread him being Killed off but then I suppose you are really great at creating characters so I have faith if he is bumped off there will be another baddie I love too! I just Love how Twisted and Dark he is! What an Incredible Clifie! Great chapter with Desyre/Kieran! Then ending with Demitri randomly turning up! Thats just Fantastic! |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 17 . 5/1/2014 Awww! Gabriel probably doesn't even know how sweet he can be! Although he probably wouldn't want to be seen as sweet at all! Thinking about when he started falling in love with her! If Angie could read his mind she'd be putty in his hands! |
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 16 . 5/1/2014 Do the French drive on the opposite side of the road? I assumed it was just us Brits! I never noticed when i was there mind but i did in America, That was hard to miss once we where driving and my uncle didn't realise until we saw a car heading our way! And another time we where pulled over by police, which was totaly scary, Nothing like how you get pulled over in Scotland! My uncle got out the car to speak and next second there was guns out and shouting! Not at all like here! Anyway Sorry not the point! I'm really glad you PM'd me to let me know that Kieran was seeing him as a friend that makes a much better story! Poor Kieran though Whats Demitri up to, I know he wants his eye back but whats his plan, Can't wait to see! I already liked Kieran but the more info we get on him the more complex he is and i just like him even more, maybe he could have a H.E.A one day? He deserves it! |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 20 . 4/30/2014 LOL. Fifty years. She was referring to Katrina, wasn't she? XD Gasp! I knew it! It was Dimitri. Phew. He's finally dead. How did he know from White? O: Gabriel saved her as soon as they met? Did Dimitri somehow get the information in the meanwhile? Wow. So at the Eiffel Tower, the desire to kill was actually Dimitri's. Phew. XD Wow. Angie with Gabriel's influence reminds me of her reaction to tasting Gabriel's blood in the last chapter. Was that the effect of Gabriel's influence too? LOL. Gabriel is really eager isn't he. XD Wohoo. Let the action begin. XD all kinds of them. Iif you know what I mean. ;) |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 19 . 4/29/2014 Aaah... The story is finally catching up to speed! XD When Dimitri revealed his bulletproof vest, I was like "HEY!" XD that was cheating and he knows it. Wow, what IS happening to Gabriel? It's the fey blood but what's going to happen? Aah! DX And oh nuui Kieran! What I feared has happened. ㅠ.ㅠWhat now? What now? This is so awesome. ㅠ.ㅠ And if that's not Gabriel then who? O.O GASP! Dimitri? Or... Or... Gabriel has somehow resorted to his old savage and cruel self or something and he doesn't call himself Gabriel anymore. O: That is so awesome! -o- |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 18 . 4/29/2014 DUN DUN... Aaah! How did he get there? DX How did he past Gabriel? Oh no! What's going to happen now!? I hate it...Who am I kidding, NO! I LOVE IT! XD YAY, Dimitri is here! LOL. The auction was so funny. Did Gabriel tone down his influence so much that no one wanted to bid on him? XD I find that hard to believe since he is looking so good. And this time, I'm not going to let Angie ruin his hairstyle! XD at least not until after the auction. Hehe. Ahaha. Did he also overhear that she is into shibari? That would be quite interesting wouldn't it? XD Why is she so worried about being heard back home? LOL. I soppose it's kind of perverted of Gabriel too. :P I abolitely loved the dance bit BTW, "I'm trying to remember." XD As soon as Kieran said that, I tried to imagine him crying to 'Angel Kiss'. Let me tell you, extremely weird and absolutely hilarious. XD LOL. Is he afraid because she is a 'Papillion' or because she is Desyre? XD maybe both. YES. YES. YES! Dimitri is back. This is so awesome! XD but I'm a little scared for Kieran. D: |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 17 . 4/29/2014 Hey, I went through the story on Mibba. There are many things... That.. Are not here. O.o LOOOL. Angie is into Shibari! XDD how fun it would be when Kieran realizes what it really is and not "just Japanese knot tying". XD Gabriel with his old hairdo.. Aw yisssss. XD I can just imagine him.. *dreamy* So it has been going on for so long. It really was so different in the beginning, wasn't it. I know everyone was kind of waiting for them to get together but I liked the buildup more. *sheepish* For me, it could've went on forever and I wouldn't have minded. XD |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 16 . 4/29/2014 YES! YES! YES! I KNEW IT! I forgot to mention it in the last review. But Black Tie Event... Old hairdo Gabriel... In a suit. XD Ah. It seems that red is Angie's favourite colour. :D Gasp. O.O it's Dimitri. He's back for his eye! DX how did he know? Aaaah. Kieran... Nuu |
augmentedDREAMS chapter 15 . 4/26/2014 Third time? O.O WHY AM I NOT GETTING ANY EMAILS FOR THIS? DX *cry* LOOL. Kieran likes Gabriel. xDD and he's having wet dreams about him in his maid outfit. How precious. XD When Gabriel said- someone I REALLY don't want to see. I was like chanting "Desyre! Desyre! Desyre!" And then when she entered I was like "Yaaaay!" A bachelor auction. -w- this just keeps getting better and better. xD |