Reviews for PV2 - Paris Redux
augmentedDREAMS chapter 14 . 4/26/2014
About the flashbacks.. I have no comments about it. XD LOL.

Apart from that... It really was a nice and sweet day. And we got to know their back story. :D Turns out, Arthur isn't really a bad guy after all. Hm, I wouldn't have believed that back in Nightmare City. Haha. So much has changed...
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 15 . 4/26/2014
Oh No! I thought Kieran was actually liking Gabriel as a friend i didn't want it to be because he fancied him, I hope it's just Gabriel uncontrolling Influence right now because he wasn't interested before and he does seem confused by it all! I hope it just is because he is actually starting to see him as a friend and the influence making him confused! Because he dosen't really have male friends and Gabriel's only other male friend is in Kiddie form and married and far too innocent, Not like Kieran! I'm Glad i'm caught up again, Can't wait for more! Really love your storys! It shows your talent when you can produce them quickly and they are perfect! Others take months to produce a perfect chapter! I can only imagine you are brimming with Ideas for this story and the rest comes naturally! Fantastic!
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 14 . 4/26/2014
Chapter 14,Aww! Another Sweet chapter! Whats gotten into you over the Easter Hols, I think you've been eating too much chocolate! However i did still Love it! Good to get a bit of background info on Angie's mum and dad!
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 13 . 4/26/2014
Chapter13, Was really Lovely, Gabriel is just so sweet too, this whole chapter was sweet even the end with what Kieran said to Gabriel, I'm glad these two are friends, They both respect each other and have found shared interests! Yeah dead sweet chapter! But now everyone is tired and Gabriel is rested what will he get up too?
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 12 . 4/26/2014
chap12, As i said before your storys are so unpredictable but brilliant, now i'm wondering who was watching them? was it Dimitri? did he know where they where because of Kieran taking of the patch? And what's up with Gabriel, Fantastic, I'm glad this wasn't a 'Clifie' for me! by the way Dimitri is a really great character he's Creepy and Scary but confusingly Sweet sometimes Defo one of my Fav's! I hope that if you kill him off that somehow he won't really be dead so we can get more of him in the future, I love how unhinged he is! Brilliant character!
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 11 . 4/26/2014
I'm not sure what the best fight scene is at the moment i'd have to go over them again to be sure! But i did like the last one in paris when they where investigating Nora's grave and Gabriel was buried and underestimated, But i liked Angie taken out Katrina too! I will get back to you on that one another time but for now you have nothing to worry about your fight scene's have always been good, I can't think of anything i didn't like!
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 10 . 4/26/2014
Chapter 10, Wow poor Angie Gabriel can be damn hot when he wants to be! No wonder she seemed lost for words after that! I was finishing off another story by someone else and the wrighting was good but the story plot wasn't and it was a let down but i had to finish it! One of those types, But when i got back to reading this and came to the bit she told Gabriel "You're not an old man, Gabriel. Arthur's an old man, not you" I was like aah! this is what i need good humour good wrighting/characters & good plot loved this chapter!
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 9 . 4/26/2014
I would still read your storys on these two even after they where a couple because i'm sure your talented enough to make it enjoyable! Plus i'd love to get a spin off on Nymph/Donovan! The only reason i didn't start reading Nora's spin off was because i wanted to wait until you wrote more but now i know of Yuki, I will read that when this book is done, I should of had faith in you! I thought it would just be her as a little girl but after reading about whats been happening in her life so far i will read it when you continue, You have great characters so when these two hook up like my fav author Sherrilyn Kenyon you can do other books with different characters but keep the old one's in too so the fans still get to read about them! I would Love a Donovan/Nymph story, Though i'm still gutted about Florance's loss! Anyway i have catching up now the little un's back at nursery!
augmentedDREAMS chapter 13 . 4/25/2014
LOL. I know what picture Nora sent Kieran. XD

Aw. This was such a nice chapter. :) and so romantic.

I know. I know. DX the way Gabriel treated her was awful. He gives me the chills. D: Ah. The real Gabriel. That's the one we all love. :3

Ahaha. Kieran and Angie talking about sharing. LOL. Angie was talking as if she was actually considering the idea of considering it. XD that would be so hot, BTW. O.O
augmentedDREAMS chapter 12 . 4/25/2014
The unarmed male vampire jumped up onto the girder next to Angie. She pointed her gun at him. "You'll have better luck against my boyfriend." she told him firmly.

My reaction- O_O Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah SHE SAID IT! SHE SAID IT! XD SHE CALLED HIM HER BOYFRIEND! XDD Eeeeeeeeheeeeheeee

Oho. What happened to Gabriel? O_O that really was so unlike him. Even last time at least he was in his wits. O: I do wonder if there was something wrong with the blood. Desire to hurt? DX desire to hurt Angie!? No! Snap out of it, Gabriel! DX

LOL. Gabriel told her Kieran is okay with sharing her. Poor Angie. XD

And who was the hooded person, I wonder. -w-
augmentedDREAMS chapter 11 . 4/25/2014
Oh my God! I didn't get ANY update for chapter 11 and 12. Stupid FP. DX I knew something was wrong. ㅠ.ㅠ

LOL. This chapter was so cute. The scene where Gabriel blows into Kieran's ear had me laughing out loud SO hard! XD

Hm. My favourite fight scene has to be the final fight between Katrina and Angie. Man, that was epic.

Can't talk. I'm going to read the rest. :D
augmentedDREAMS chapter 10 . 4/21/2014
Ahaha! :D

Aw yissssss. xD I was so worried that after last chapter Gabriel would think that Angie liked Kieran but phew. It's all sorted out now. -w-

His various "I want you..."'s were so sexy. xDD

I can't stop giggling heehee. XD
augmentedDREAMS chapter 9 . 4/20/2014
Revenge? O.O what does she want in revenge. .

LOL. Kieran likes Desyre. You know, when I first saw that he likes Desyre I thought how would he react to knowing she's a vampire. Now I do. XD and it was awesome. Kieran was crushed that his crush is a vampire. XD

LOL. Dexter is in deep water now. I wondr if Nora could hear his fluttering heart. XP

Aw. Gabriel. D: he just has to listen in at the wrong time. DX what'll happen now? Angie has to tell him soon! DX or he'll really think she likes Kieran! DX
Wee Bean Nighe chapter 8 . 4/19/2014
Yes i definatly loved it! but i also love the fact that you took it slow and built it up! Or maybe i'm thinking that now because they have finaly said it out loud to each other! I really enjoy the adventures these two have as well as their blooming love, So i don't mind you not rushing it anyway, I know they will have their H.E.A together and I know I will enjoy reading every moment! Totaly invested I am now because of your previous books! Wow Gabriel is going to get Dimitri? Don't know why i didn't think about that happening but that is so Gabriel he, He doesn't forget not when it comes to Angie! More to look forward too! Happy Easter!
augmentedDREAMS chapter 8 . 4/19/2014
Caught you! xD

"There's always the oral exam."
"Absolutely NOT!" Ahahaha! XD You have no idea how hard I laughed at the one. After Gabriel's part in the play, this one was my absolute favourite! xD LOL.

Don't worry Angie. *puts a hand on her shoulder* it's not just you. *fangirl* -w-

Cute. LOL. I'm never going to forget that. XD oh, Kieran. And Gabriel was wearing a Maid outfit! Aah! XD I can just imagine him. And he DOES look really cute. :3

LOL. When Nora said she wouldn't betray Dimitri, I thought "oh no. What'll happen now?" and then she was like "I WILL however commit treason if you wear this." I was like "Hm. Crafty. I like. :D"

This was one of my all time favourite chapters! xD super awesome.
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