Reviews for The Vampire's Slave |
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![]() ![]() Incredible story as always I just despise the long wait inbetween When can us hardcore fans expect the next chapter? Xx |
![]() ![]() I KNEW IT! I Bloody knew it! AHHHHH and now we have to wait half a year for an update! |
![]() ![]() I KNEW IT! Thank u so much for updating u don't realise how many times I have read/reread this story. Please don't keep us waiting too long like last time for the next Chapter. I would literally pay for your work. If Victoria manages to escape I really want to see Anton's reaction! Really interested on what's going on with the other colonies too. |
![]() ![]() Any idea on when the next chapter will be? Keep checking on this story crazily often for an update |
![]() ![]() Please, please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee post something soon I literally check this story like every other day to see if you've updated. Pleaseeeeeee |
![]() ![]() This is an amazing story! the only thing I hate is the long wait between chapters :( :( Please please pleaseeeeee post soon! |
![]() ![]() I thought Bianca was supposed to be intelligent? Doesnt she realise if Victoria and Rachel escape she could be tortured for information as her guards are all aware their close. |
![]() ![]() Darn it, I hate cliffhangers and the dreaded wait between chapter. I would honestly pay for work like this everything from the plot to the depth of the characters would be worth every penny. Please don't make us wait as long as last time (which is rather selfish of me as we are all aware you have your own commitments in the real world!). In my head I keep going back to this story, the world you have created is fascinating! Because you've created such a detailed world you always have the possibility of creating spin off stories based on this world. Once you've finished this story, you should seriously consider getting a publishers opinion/ or sell it as an ebook on amazon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again a phenomenal method of handling a disturbing subject. I definitely cried a bit for Tori and what she was going through and you did a great job of portraying how hard that kind of topic is for people to talk about, and how she blamed herself despite it not being her fault at all, and how she lashed out from people she expected pity from... Very realistic and heartbreaking all around, great work. |
![]() ![]() This story is frankly addictive the last chapter was hard to read though. Anton has finally cracked and honestly is irredeemable after this,I really want to see Dante's and Biancas reaction. When I was reading the story there was a part that mentioned vampire couples can only have a lottery for a baby after a death within the colony. Surely this would encourage the death of peasant vampires more often in order to have more lotteries? Soz if I'm going off on a tangent you've created a complex world and you are an amazing writer please continue it's been a while since u last posted! |
![]() ![]() when u gonna update? keep goin back to this amazing story xxx |