Reviews for Unexpected
TheAnimeHannah chapter 11 . 7/22/2014
. . . . . Don't kill him . . . . . Please don't, you're making me cry already! :'( Please update again soon!
TheAnimeHannah chapter 10 . 7/16/2014
Ah! This one made me cry :') please update again soon, I am so attached to these characters!
myheart4you chapter 10 . 7/16/2014
SETH AGGHHHH... Like, I totally get why he's mad, but it's still unfortunate. Anyway, yeah, things are definitely more intense. I'm super excited to see what happens.
myheart4you chapter 9 . 7/4/2014
Okay, I'm less confused now. Very nice, this chapter was pretty dang emotional, wow. Ugh, I feel so bad that he has to hide it from his family. I totally understand though. But I also feel bad for Hayden :\

Dude, I'm kinda excited to see what's up next :)
UnitedXlove chapter 7 . 7/3/2014
I loved this story untill the name changes I just don't see the need for the change of names like names aren't the most important part :(
isaidiwasreading chapter 8 . 7/1/2014
So... yeah... I'm still kind about the name change, but whatever, the writing is , I just need to read from the beginning. Oh well, it's still a good story :)
Guest chapter 8 . 7/1/2014
Awesome story,I've never seen a story on here that seemed that it could be a author writing it.
Please,please,keep posting chapters
Lady Seratopia chapter 5 . 6/30/2014
Why did you change Hanna and Nate's names?
facebook gurl chapter 7 . 6/9/2014
Dude, idk, I guess he has way more confidence than me, because I would be jealous as anything watching him flirt with other girls, even with the knowledge that he's gay.

AWWW yay, it happened... I must be super naive or something, never heard the term "topped" but I mean hey, it is unexpected from him. (heehee, see how I used the title).

Awww... The part at the end made me sad, where they were talking about their families. I'm glad they have each other though :3

Omigosh, nooooo, it better not hit me any harder or I'm gonna have a black eye ;P
lfreed chapter 6 . 5/30/2014
That chapter was...unexpected. But really perfect all the same.
myheart4you chapter 6 . 5/29/2014
whoa. Intense
So they like it rough, huh? Lol. Hot.

ah the drama. But at least they're (I think?) together now.

loved it. Very nice :)
facebook girl chapter 5 . 5/20/2014
JSHFEJDBJD awwww, they kissed :3 That's so freaking cute omg
I loved this chapter, probably my favorite so far. Everything was perfectly balanced in a mix of drama and romance. Lol.
I understand why Hanna did what she did, but she still shouldn't have done it. Oh well, it worked out in the end I guess.
agghhh awwwww
I wonder what' to ever happen if Nate comes out 0.o
facebook girl chapter 4 . 5/12/2014
Just awwwwhhh... I love them so much. Even if Nate doesn't realize it, he likes Hayden. Of course the delusions of sickness always cause the need for someone to sleep in the same bed... Fabulous.
Like I said, I love how pervy they are. It's so great, and it reminds me of some conversations with my friends.
Hayden is like the nicest person in the world. He really is. Either that or his dick is taking care of Nate ;P JK
MagnificentFern chapter 4 . 5/9/2014
Yeah, I am definitely reading and enjoying this :) I don't know if i have relevant feedback to bring, as i see no bad side to what you wrote so far. The pace is really good, not lingering aimlessly, pretty swift but not overly so, in a good way. Overall a really good synergy between your writing style and the speed at which the fiction evolves.

Your fiction made it in my favorites list and even received a review, be considerate of how huge an honor this is and -pshhhh no just kidding :) I am just eager to read more of your work. Thanks and cheers :)
isfuathliomgaeilge chapter 4 . 5/8/2014
Hey there! :) I'm reading and really enjoying this! :) I have read Metamorphis and I'm reading Ascencion and I love them! :) you have a great style of writing that draws me in! :) hope to read more of your work soon! :)
K x
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