That was FABULOUS! Yay like aww. . Like I'm in a relationship with a girl and I'm a girl and it's a lot better than being with a guy. Relationships with the same gender I think are easier, and cuter. Well sometimes. But anyways, amazing! Update ASAP please!
Love, Quoia aka NamieLuvsAllFanFics

I know what you mean when you said this is a fast paced story. Things have escalated quickly. It's completely understandable that this is more of a short since Metamorphosis and Ascension are so much longer.

I love your penchant for creating witty characters. They always have something smartass-y to say. I wonder if "I don't scream when I pee" means what I think it means...

I just finished the first chapter, and at the beginning, I was unsure what to expect, but I knew that your characters were already interesting.

Then came the twist. I didn't expect that, especially since this is just the beginning of the story. The synopsis gave me a totally different impression of what would happen, now it seems that there's something else at work.

I'm surprised this hasn't gotten any reviews yet, I mean, it IS written by you. I'm gonna read the next chapter now before I start to sound like a fanboy.