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Reviews for
Sacrifice
Noll Daybreak
chapter 1 .
4/12/2014
(Not in need of a review return, just commenting to express my love for your poetry)
The line about the grass is my favorite but the whole idea of freedom and imprisonment? Beautiful, just beautiful! :)