This is so sad. I want to know what happened to Tori and how things got the way they did.

This looks really promising. I'd love to know more about Tori and her life.

I see you've written another story. So far, just from this little excerpt of text I can tell that this holds a lot of potential and that Tori's story is going to be a trip of hardship, darkness and love. I look forward to seeing what transpires.

Insightful, dark, sorrowful and well-written. Good job!

This is good so far. Such a dramatic start. I'd love to see how it goes from here.

I was told to come and read this and I am definitely impressed! Going to stick to this story now!

-faves this story- It looks sooo good!

I heard you wrote another story so I came over to tell you what I thought of it. There's only a small amount here, and compared to your other prologues it's relatively short but it pulls you in and makes you want to read the first chapter. I look forward to an update from you.

This looks good...I'd totally be interested in reading it.

This is awesome so far! I hope that you'll write more on it.

This looks promising. I'd like to know Tori's story.

This looks so good! I want to read more!

This is an awesome story so far. I really like Tori's dark views on the world. I can't wait to see what you do next!

Holy crap! You wrote a new story! I actually thought you'd update one of your old ones but hey a new one is good too (though I still want updates on Inconsequential, IM Me, Curse of the Crazy Eights, and Parallel, those were my favorites). I look forward to knowing more stuff about Tori and the whole story of what happened between her and Azalea. Great job!

Tori definitely has an interesting little prologue. I wonder how she got that way of thinking and who exactly Azalea was.