Reviews for Secret
Randompasserby chapter 7 . 2/17/2017
Actually... That's not how that works. Just because there is "no fingerprint" doesn't mean that the person doesn't have any DNA. If there wasn't a fingerprint, it's easily assumable that the perpetrator's fingertips had been burned off, meaning there wouldn't be a print, or they put layers of glue on their fingertips to attain a smooth surface and prevent leaving a trace. Or they could have been wearing gloves. Love the story so far, just thought I'd let ya know, for future reference. Huge mystery fan here, so any hint of suspense is something I go all detective over. _'
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
"She interrupted my babbling with a harsh scream. As I recovered from my momentary deafness, she pulled herself to my ear, her breath rough and random.."

I don't know why this made me laugh
Bahati chapter 34 . 2/13/2015
Omg this is the best story I've ever read. I loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
I've just finished reading and I love it! I'm just sad it had tl end haha
butterbar chapter 33 . 9/12/2014
*refer to earlier review

HI REVO! (again this will be another LOOOOOOOONNNNNGGGGG REVIEW) but hey? You said to post it right? No matter how long or short? XD It's the only thing I can give you for writing this piece of perfection.

Soooo, Revo... This couldn't have gone any better! The ending was super freaking romantic. LIKE BURSTING WITH SENSUALITY! As in. GOD.

Did death make me look ugly?
Not even a bit, Seth.

I'm so glad to see you grow and progress in writing! but I'm not saying you're not a good writer, okay? YOU'RE AWESOME DUDE! Do not forget that. Like I mean ever!

I am very honored that I got to read this! :D this is just ONE OF A KIND BRO.
Just like I said with my first review!
REVO. Words cannot explain my thoughts on this. Like It just can't. I LOVE THIS WITH ALL MY HEART.

And bro, recreating their first conversation ever just broke my heart. (see? I can still remember it! XD)
It didn't break my heart with pain.
But with joy.

It just made me wanna cry. Just to see on how far they have come. Like, from enemies that I hate each other to the bones to deeply and madly inlove lovers!

You wrapped this up in the most wonderful marvelous possible way you can. And I thank you for that. Big time.

THIS STORY IS SO BEAUTIFUL.. ;'( I might cry because it's over. Actually I am crying right now. ;'(

You are one heck of a writer! Don't stop writing! Like ever!

You're awesome so stay like it! :D

val chapter 34 . 7/10/2014
OMG OMG OMG you made me sooooo happy!
Justlookin4agoodread98 chapter 34 . 7/9/2014
FireIceandPoison chapter 33 . 7/7/2014
i seriously started mentally crying and hyperventalating and OH MY GOODNESS WQHERE IS THE SEQUEL. AHHHH I'M GONNA COMBUST IF THERE ISN'T MORE!
FireIceandPoison chapter 31 . 7/7/2014
oh thank goodness Leo is good.
FireIceandPoison chapter 30 . 7/7/2014
first off... I LOVE YOU SETH/CHAOS!
second...dang it Oz!
FireIceandPoison chapter 29 . 7/7/2014
i wish i could be kissed like that (by chaos would be even better but things like that are only in the depths of the mind) i love it!
FireIceandPoison chapter 27 . 7/7/2014
i can understand the "the first time has to perfect" bit but darn it thats what i was yearning for in this chapter *whines and pouts*...whoops.
FireIceandPoison chapter 26 . 7/7/2014
i am seriously hyperventalating from how happy i am right now.
FireIceandPoison chapter 25 . 7/7/2014
uhhhhhh had to admit i knew the cop was in on it but...dang. didn't go as far as to think he was hondo. huh
FireIceandPoison chapter 24 . 7/7/2014
i kinda thought he wouldn't do that and that horus is a real peice of work but then...Seth is chaos.

my brain hurts
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