Personally, I love short stories. But is this a poem? Or a story? Im sorry if that sounded mean, it's just how you wrote it. Please don't take it badly w Maybe you could write more stories like this. But either ways I love it.
Keep up the good work! Oxphine

THIS WAS SO ADORABLE! I LOVED IT! THE WAY YOU CAPTIVATED SUCH EMOTION FROM A SMALL GESTURE WAS AMAZING. GREAT WORK! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE WRITING!

Sweet kisses,
CandaayLover

Aww :) that was cute! Was it a poem or a story?

Sorry I never reviewed any thing of yours before :( I try to return reviews, but I'm so busy, and ... yeah. Adorable, though!

Its sweet! I like it! You are pretty good for a first-time writer. I am kind of new, too. :)

It's cute! And you're doing a really good job. I'm writing my first story too and am currently struggling with the second chapter...anyway. XD
Keep writing!