|Reviews for Angel|
| demando chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
This is what I like postmodernism: you read the story, and wonder what in the world it was all about. so many thinks to read between the lines, and so many options as to what the characters represent.
Happy writing and update soon.
| ThunderHead chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
This is quite enticing! My only criticism I have about it is the line "My captor is laughing. Why is she laughing? Is it all a joke to her..." and the rest of the line. I got a little confused there when the rest of the story was "Angel does this" but then I realized it was the character thinking to herself. For that you may want to make the text italics or bold so the reader can differentiate the characters thoughts from the dialogue and actions.