|Reviews for Voice(less)|
| moonsliver86 chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Interesting concept. Might be better with a small change in choice of words.
Consider using soundless, wordless, voiceless, less, and maybe silence in the haiku so that it could have better impact with your choice of title.
| Helen Cole chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
I like the second line. This is very powerful, even as short as it is.
If you wouldn't mind, I would love some feedback on a story I'm working on. It's called "On the Other End of the Phone"