|Reviews for The Witch's Son|
| Melody Curtiss chapter 4 . 4/29/2014
Serena isn't as clear of a character to me as the others you have drawn so far. I'm not certain why. I think I would like to see more of Serena's personality through actions. The peanut butter jar was a good way to go. I will PM you the rest of my thoughts on that.
Can't wait to see the next chapter.
| Melody Curtiss chapter 2 . 4/29/2014
I am intrigued by both mother and son. They are distinct characters with clear voices. I want to see the mother-son relationship devleop - and I'm curious. I am wondering whether or not Hattie has under-estimated her son and whether her bias has caused him permanent damage.
Dean's behavior strikes me as entirely masculine. Bravo for writing a male who thinks and acts like a male without being a putz.
Maggie fascinates me. I think there's an agenda there yet to be revealed.
| Melody Curtiss chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
The concept is wonderful, the writing charming and fresh. Love it so far.