This chapter was short but a nice little read showing the aftermath of what happened in the prior chapter. I can't wait to see what future updates you hold for me. I really do love this little story.

This chapter had a nice, emotional ending. It was very heartwarming and the confession was cute as well. I finished this chapter feeling all fluffy inside. Great job.

It's nice to see the girls enjoying themselves as they have their little fun. I wonder what Seto is doing there and why he's watching them like he is.

This chapter started with a bang regarding Seto's explosive secret. I liked the way that Hanan reacted to it in all honesty. The extra touch afterwards helped characterize further the relationship with Hanan and Haneen. They are so cute when they interact.

Man, Seto's secret is pretty dark. I wonder what the circumstances were behind it.

A lot happened here. I can tell that you're developing a sub plot with Seto, as well as slowly integrating characters and developing them slowly. The scene with Hanan and Haneen's mother was a cute and emotional touch. Good job.

More characterization on Takako as she spends a little quality time with her. This chapter was longer than your last one but nice overall. I liked the interaction between the two as well as Takako's thoughts about her room mate.

A cute, emotional moment between sisters, mixed with some awkwardness from a first kind kiss. I loved the interaction between Hanan and Haneen. It's very cute and effectively written. Great job.

It wasn't quite the confession that she planned on giving but she at least admitted that she liked girls anyway. I also liked the dream sequence in this chapter as well. It was cute and alluring. Good job.

It's been a while since I've read anything here and I noticed I was behind so I came to read the rest of this wonderful story.

This chapter started off with a cute little childhood memory and ended on a sweet note, along with some empowerment. I wonder if she'll admit her feelings to her sister.

Wait…It's over? Well, then. I guess I have to give my first ever final score, huh?

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STORY: So, Hanan and Haneen are two twins living together in some area in Japan. Haneen, as it turns out, gains feelings for her sister, and everything explodes from there.

PROS: I really enjoyed how you build up the romance between the siblings. It feels rather natural and satisfying. On top of that, you've got some interesting plot lines. It also has nice pacing until the last chapter.

CONS: What was not satisfying was how you ended the story. It feels…incomplete. When you end a series, you want some sort of closure. I didn't get that. What I did get, however, was a wanting of more. If you're really not gonna continue this, you really ought to fix that ending.

SCORE: 7 out of 10

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CHARACTERS: Well, there's the bookworm Haneen and the extroverted Hanan. Unless I'm getting those mixed up…The supporting cast is also fairly well, thought I can't exactly remember them…

PROS: I like the twins as a whole. They handle the problems thrown at them in a rather calm fashion. I also think Sato (if that's right) deserves mentioning as well, despite his little…secret. He was also enjoyable.

CONS: Yet, I still can't shake off the reaction the supporting cast gave when there was the incestual confession of love. They gave the twins a lot of shit, perhaps a bit too much. Sure, they get over it, but that still doesn't change their past actions and how I felt about the reactions.

SCORE: 6 out of 10

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WRITING: Told in a normal third person omniscient format.

PROS: I can get through without too much of a problem, and that's good. I like to be able to read without getting ticked off at a mistake.

CONS: Of course, nothing is perfect, as there is the ever-present slip-up when it comes to grammar or dialogue. Perhaps you can give a quick run-through and fix them?

SCORE: 7 out of 10

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FINAL VERDICT: This is a story with a nice concept, a good start-up, and good plot lines. However, the lack of a sense of closure paired with some of the shitty reactions of incest from the supporting cast prevent me from completely enjoying this story to the fullest.

Now, given the categories of Story, Characters, Writing, as well as my own personal enjoyment, has me giving Amor Vincit Omnia a final score of:

6.75 out of 10, with a recommendation to read it.

Nice finale. I was expecting something like this and you executed the story well enough that I really enjoyed going through it, Kingo. Sad to see this one go, there are hardly any stories of this kind in this place.

Excellent ending. I usually don't read romantic stories but you give it such a flair. Good job on an excellent story.

Interesting, it's rare to see incest stories on FIctionpress. Anyway, I llove you rstyle of wrtinig, you gave very nice and vivid descriptions. And I already have a nice sense of the relationship between Hanan and Haneen.

And the truth comes out. Wonder how everything will go from here.