|Reviews for Echoes|
| Helen Cole chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
By reading the summary, I wondered why one might care to read about an echo, but I loved this from the first line. You have a very nice writing style and the thought of an echo being so far reaching is pretty cool.
I liked the interaction between the two, from the very beginning.
Sometimes it's hard to tell who's saying what. It would be helpful to indicate that. It doesn't need to be indicated on every line, just every once in a while.
I am liking this so far. More please!
I would love it if you could take a peek at my story "On the Other End of the Phone"