|Reviews for A Thousand Cranes of Wishes|
| Helen Cole chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
First of all, let me just say that your summary was excellent and drew me in. That's one of the most important parts of any good story. Nobody can read it if they don't get past the summary. (Speaking of, I could use tips on how to make my summaries better)
You switch back and forth between current tense and past tense. Pick one and stick to it.
I like that you sneak in the description of Meagan without using a paragraph to describe her. Like when you say she tied her long brown hair into a messy bun.
I would love it you could read my story "On the Other End of the Phone". I could use some help on the summary.