|Reviews for Husks, Part I: Et tu, Zombie?|
| Susan Baron chapter 1 . 8/23/2020
So far so good, I like how this is developing.
| hectorsmom chapter 32 . 9/3/2015
One of the more interesting " zombie " tales recently put out. Nice mixture of characters strengths and differing personalities. Loving the mold/insect queen persona! Look forward to seeing where this goes.
| Bob Evans chapter 2 . 8/10/2015
Interesting use of the First Person perspective describing events outside the protagonist's range. A unique take, something I'm not sure what more to offer.
Gotta love the Bill and Ted reference, and it helped that your protagonist is a bit of a movie buff, which helps set the tone for a zombie infestation (which might have seemed a little too campy initially). It is a bit serendipitous that your character was dreaming of being in a zombie attack right before one breaks out. Kinda threw me for a loop at first.
Otherwise, not a half bad start.
| LDF chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Please make sure to check your text before you post. There's a lot of code.
| Hellsgun SuicideScene chapter 10 . 2/24/2015
Hilarious last part in chapter 9 x) Had I learned how to use weapons in class skol would be soo much better and Bruce is a brute. Nice chapter. And I see what u mean about the flashbacks, I don't mean to ramble ;)
| Hellsgun SuicideScene chapter 9 . 2/24/2015
Hey, fan fiction drafting messed up chapter & 6. Idk if you knew this already. Yeah I hate it when it does that
| Alycenwonder chapter 28 . 1/25/2015
I love it! I can't wait to see what is next.
| Hellsgun SuicideScene chapter 8 . 12/26/2014
Can you put dashes in between scene changes and or say "flashback" or "POV" change or the timeline. It'll help the confusion where the story is at points.
| Hellsgun SuicideScene chapter 4 . 12/23/2014
The life of otaku's: "Zombie invasion, otakus says "finally life just became real" XD
| Hellsgun SuicideScene chapter 3 . 12/23/2014
Cant kill zombies on an empty stomach. Nice descriptions
| Hellsgun SuicideScene chapter 2 . 12/19/2014
"Even the real shitty ones" XD yeah I love this story, im a loyal zom head(zombie fanic) plz continue. I saw one mistake but it was small, towards the end when Izzy wrappibg a bandage 'she' was i guess meant to be 'the' if that helps c:
| Hellsgun SuicideScene chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
| gamion chapter 25 . 12/13/2014
Very interesting take on a zombie story. I'm intrigued as to where it will lead after the most recent story has been posted.
| gamion chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Et tu is Latin. Hence the entire theme of Roman formations, dumbass.
| xXMorbidButterflyXx chapter 15 . 6/6/2014
i am confused... honestly...with the way it's going so far...so...is the kid crazy? are the guys really there? i mean i was following it okay and well, i loved it so much but i'm sort of confused...