Reviews for After Happily Ever After
dragonqueen123 chapter 7 . 9/1/2014
does avis have temper issues?
dragonqueen123 chapter 5 . 9/1/2014
i would so have pushes him off the wall to
dragonqueen123 chapter 3 . 9/1/2014
the Jepson carly rae thing is so funny
dragonqueen123 chapter 2 . 9/1/2014
the dwarves names are hilarious and i love the idea of the bald young baby
YoursTruly519 chapter 10 . 8/13/2014
I think the fact that Gretel is a troubled teen is funny XD but I'm not sure that its okay to find it funny XD
YoursTruly519 chapter 9 . 8/13/2014
Everything would be normal... XD BAHAHAHHA!
Also Pinocchio and geppetos abrupt entrance and exit improved this chapter by a mile XD
Humpty is such a creep tho XD!
And the comparison at the beginning? Lol!
YoursTruly519 chapter 8 . 8/13/2014
Oh my goodness XD he should come into the story every here and there because it's excellent! And now Humpty is like an infestation to their house XD which is epic!
YoursTruly519 chapter 7 . 8/8/2014
Kissy kissy fun XD
I was really shocked when Avis killed Humpty XD but then all this talk about gingerbread (no matter how much I hate eating it) made me excited for Christmas!
YoursTruly519 chapter 6 . 8/8/2014
The only flaw in this chapter is u kept typing the wrong word. He or she for the same person.
This story makes me laugh so hard tho XD
Lara Madeline Night chapter 4 . 5/17/2014
I just love how you announce the fact that you're posting stories on another site. Very creative
I yet again laughed until I couldn't breathe. This story is just awesome.
YoursTruly519 chapter 4 . 5/16/2014
XD OMG THIS IS...UTTER FOOLISH NONSENSE XD No video games? ! O.o XD and the cheetos and the fact that carTer cant remember XD HAHAHAHHA
Guest chapter 3 . 5/10/2014
Lovely! I love how you twisted and incorporated fairy tales!
Lara Madeline Night chapter 3 . 5/10/2014
"Let him go. The chapter will be more interesting this way."
I. Laughed. Until I couldn't breathe anymore. (are you trying to kill me? XD)
THIS WAS AWESOME! I'm glad he took the fish (even though I soo badly want a dragon as my pet.)
Lara Madeline Night chapter 2 . 5/4/2014
I laughed SO much while reading this! I can't wait for the next chapter.
I never really liked the concept of happy ever after of the prince and princess, and this story is juat amazing!