Reviews for Sophia & Jensen |
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![]() ![]() You have truly made me happy with this story. This story was my get away where I would read and think about Sophia and Jensen. Your skills are so admirable and although the story ended I'll most definitely be thinking of why their futures will be in college. Hope to see more of you -Alexis |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word to describe your story: Beautiful. I felt like I could relate to some of the things Sophia was going through. I found her very realistic, and very mature for her age, but still a teenage nonetheless. I read your whole story right now, and I couldn't help but continue to the next chapter (even though I have an essay due in a couple of hours) ;p I thought the ending was very satisfying. I loved the way you pulled the reader in with the car crash, and then made it better again. You're writing has definitely gotten better as I read through each chapter. I would love to see a sequel to this. Probably Soph and Jensen in college years or maybe something happened and one of them couldn't go to Stanford (okay, I'm getting carried away now). It was refreshing to read a well-written story after a long while, and I wish you the best with future writing projects. - AngelGreyson |
![]() ![]() I don't know what to say. You ended the book in just the right spot, and I will definitely be rereading this, which I don't do often. I like the themes behind the book, too, even if you're not aware of them. You really did a great job on this story. If/when you write more, can you PM my account? It's under the same name. I hope you keep writing! - PencilsCameras |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew you were going to destroy the happiness I had. To make it a car accident is both genius and cruel! Why didn't I see this coming? Talk about a twist! Woah, do not do that to me! Lovely ending glad everything kind of worked out. I really like how you never stated that they lived happily ever after but you've left it to the reader to kind of imagine what happens. I like stories like that. I really loved this and I have a bittersweet moment that it's not over. Looking forward to reading your future pieces as long as you don't give me mini heart attacks like the one I just suffered! :) |
![]() ![]() Woohooo! Finally! This chapter was worth the wait :D |
![]() ![]() This is a great chapter, as always, but I have a piece of advice for you. Don't extend it any more than about two chapters after this, otherwise it will become a run on story, and you will lose quite a few readers. This kind of story merits an epilogue, and that's it. Have fun with the writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SHE GOT SENIOR PRESIDENT YAY I'M SO HAPPY FOR HER! I really hate her dad like seriously Amanda, urgh! Yay they're going to the same place. I sense a talk coming... BINGO! Nope I have an overload of cuteness SHE SAID OKAY! |
![]() ![]() Such a cute scene with Hannah! She's actually my favorite character now; mostly because I know what it's like to feel like you're third-wheeling with friends and everyone deserves the chance to prove how awesome they are. |
![]() ![]() I'm really annoyed that she knew she was going to lose Hanna as a friend and didn't care. You've made me hate Debbie a little more than I did before. Good job, it's going to be hard to repair this damage now, if they repair it! Perfect song choice by the way :) |
![]() ![]() Loved this little conversation between Hanna and Sofia. Haha get your shit-together and double dates! Hanna bounced back fast! :) Nope, I can't take this! What are you doing to me! :) |
![]() ![]() I really really really like this Jensen but you've got something planned and I don't know if I should be getting this excited! Screw it, he said he loves her and he's just done the most adorable thing ever! Ahhh! He thought my name was Hanna, I love this girl! |
![]() ![]() I'm so unbelievable happy that she got into university! Yay, so happy for Sofia does this mean things will start looking up? Pizza is the best way to celebrate things! I really want Debbie and Sofia to sort things out in some level but she's being horrible! HE SAID WHAT HAVE MY EYES GOT MAD, DID HE JUST SAY I LOVE YOU?! OH MY GOODNESS! HAHA I LOVE HANNA! |
![]() ![]() Loved it !:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it..can't wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() Can't wait until those two work things out face-to-face! Another great chapter - I always look forward to updates! |