Reviews for The Birth
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
hehe. I feel this scene from so many different fantasy books or animes. Classic. The characters are already there, ready and waiting - your few words link right to them, perfectly in tune.
I'm not sure how I feel about the choice to de-capitalize. I do think the choice of italics, and each mark of punctuation was made perfectly. Mmm, coming back to it, yes. I like the absence of capitals. It helps to fit the words into the sense of an ongoing scene, where capitals in the haiku format might make it visually stand awkward alone, placed, not taken from a script.

Nice work :)
J.L.Rodriguez chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
no it certainly is not! Fight on, proud warrior, fight on! Great piece, madness!
The Beautiful Filth chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
Wow. Just... Wow. I love the malicious tone that comes with the haiku.