|Reviews for Father|
| audrey chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
You should email me I think I can help you through this. I went through a very similar situation with my dad.
| Valine chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
First of all, let me give you a virtual hug. *huggles*
This piece is quite personal. I believe your father will be able to understand how you perceive his feelings for you. It would definitely be nice to write one in your point of view. It will make a good accompaniment for this (if you plan on writing and posting it) and your father will be able to understand you better.
Just edit this a bit, grammar-wise and watch out for the shift in tenses, just stick to one.
That is all Good luck. :)
| Keekster chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
This is really touching, the separations of lines help to add emphasis, a little bit of editing grammar wise will make this one great piece of writing, try writing in your point of view to compare them and see which one you're most comfortable with