Reviews for Dragon's Slave
aPondInTime chapter 55 . 2/18/2018
Oh my word! Such a hectic chapter! What happens next?
MileyRowling chapter 54 . 2/14/2018
Great update!
TheAverageReader chapter 54 . 2/14/2018
Small suggestion to put depth into the Evil Weirborn, he seems like a classic villian "lust for power", maybe make it so he had ended up like a slave like the main character, give him a reason

Also it would be fun if he turned out to be her brother, maybe redeem himself in the end, through sacrafice.

Another suggestion, maybe add a much more sinister threat to the story, a threat that maybe designed this whole war problem all along, and the reason why the weirborn had returned was to stop this threat, to end it once and for all

Anyways just some suggestions for this in depth story
EventualHorizon chapter 53 . 1/31/2018
Things are getting quite interesting. Really looking forward to the next few chapters.
MileyRowling chapter 53 . 1/30/2018
Good update!
luckybrains chapter 53 . 1/29/2018
Whaaat what!? Suicide? Why?

I really hope Kamryn gets back in time and that the West is really in danger. Those dragons had better behave too.
Please update soon. We're reaching a climax here :o
MileyRowling chapter 52 . 1/23/2018
Nice update!
Enigma39 chapter 1 . 1/21/2018
This is so cool! The characters are distinctive and the world seems well thought out. I can't wait to keep reading this story!
Guest chapter 51 . 1/17/2018
Pls be a brother pls be a brother pls be a brother plsplsplsplsplsplsasplsplsssplspalaplspslzpzlzlzlslslspspspapslsp
MileyRowling chapter 51 . 1/17/2018
Good job!
luckybrains chapter 51 . 1/15/2018
Thanks for the update. It was a great chapter. I'm very curious to see how Fynn and Kamryn's conversation will go if they manage to chat before the tournament. Also what favour will he ask? Excited to read more.
MileyRowling chapter 50 . 1/2/2018
Great update!
luckybrains chapter 50 . 1/1/2018
Whaaaaatttt? I did NOT expect that! I mean I think we all knew it was going to be another Weirborn. But Fynn!? I need to go back and reread all the encounters with him now.

I wonder what Kamryn is going to say to him in response and what Fynn might ask as his favour? Is it going to be to let him win? Or is it maybe something bigger than that - to do with freedom of dragons and/or slaves? Is he actually evil? Does he treat dragons the same way Kamryn does?

Great description of the royal ball. This was a really well written chapter.

Also, happy New Year!
MileyRowling chapter 49 . 12/28/2017
Wonderful update!
luckybrains chapter 49 . 12/20/2017
Awww these two are so cute. I really hope they find a way to be together. Maybe Katar can just throw it in as a requirement that the war can only end if this law changes :P

I'm glad he's finally opened up to Jaen about how he feels. It's refreshing how your characters don't beat around the bush too much but rather communicate with each other and express themselves.

Excited to see what's coming next.
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