| Reviews for Demons |
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   Everfew chapter 1 . 6/1/2014 Seems interesting, though I don't understand much when it comes to the concept, yet. Be careful with the dialogues. You tend to write: "Hello" I say. When it should be like this: "Hello," I say. There's supposed to be a comma there. And you tend to forget it a lot. Now I'm going to read the rest. :) |
| LaneKathryn chapter 15 . 5/29/2014 THE DEMONS ARE COMING TO INVADE! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE :0 lol. This was a really good chapter, thanks :) |
| LaneKathryn chapter 14 . 5/27/2014 Ahhaha lol, poor Dana, talking to the weird crazy country people. This was a great chapter, thanks! I'm actually in the middle of an English lesson, and I saw you had updated, so I'm like, OMG, screw this lesson, I need to read this. Thanks heaps :D |
| LaneKathryn chapter 13 . 5/26/2014 He gave his sword a hug? That could have ended badly... Lol. This was another great chapter, I love how they're all trying to kill each other over monopoly! Thanks :D |
| CelinetheShadow chapter 1 . 5/25/2014 I've only read the first chapter, but it seems very interesting. I love that the characters have number names. I can imagine the parents of demons, "45, take out the trash!" "48, stop drooling." Other than some grammatical errors, the story is fun and fresh. The concept is new, because usually the stories revolve around the heroes not the villains. Keep writing and great job! |
| LaneKathryn chapter 12 . 5/24/2014 Woah! They are oldies!do they have seniors cards? Lol. Anyway... awesome chapter, the dialogue was perfect! Thanks :) |
| LaneKathryn chapter 11 . 5/24/2014 Ooooh scary 15 :) I liked this chapter, it had humour in it, which is always good :D |
| LaneKathryn chapter 10 . 5/23/2014 This was a great chapter! Things are getting moving :D and are you implying that you are in fact a demon who has benny transported down from some evil planet to spy on humans? *slowly back away with arms up* Hehe, thanks for the chapter! |
| LaneKathryn chapter 9 . 5/22/2014 Hey nice chapter! It's wasn't exactly a cliffy, but for some reason it still left me hanging more more! Can't wait till the next update, thanks heaps :) |
| LaneKathryn chapter 8 . 5/20/2014 Haha hypothetical cookies:) they are the best kind! Thanks for the great chapter |
| LaneKathryn chapter 7 . 5/20/2014 Hey, nice chapter :) |
| LaneKathryn chapter 6 . 5/15/2014 Lol. Nice chapter. I'm kind of in school right now, so I'll make this review quick. Thanks a heap (: |
| LaneKathryn chapter 5 . 5/13/2014 Damn, she got beat up good. That was a really good chapter! The fighting was realistic, I seem to always have a problem making the fighting sound legit it my writing. Well done and thanks :D |
| LaneKathryn chapter 4 . 5/12/2014 *gasp!* cliff hanger! arghhh she's gonna get beat up! This left me on th edge of my seat, plz plz update soon! Danke für das Kapitel! Lol... German. |
| LaneKathryn chapter 3 . 5/11/2014 Hahah Jell-O, nice. This was a great chapter again! Thanks :) |