|Reviews for the smiling bandit|
| GingeRael chapter 7 . 12/1/2014
Hope you keep updating this!
| GingeRael chapter 6 . 12/1/2014
Does Jeffery remind you of a western sort of Robin Hood? He does for me lol.
| GingeRael chapter 5 . 12/1/2014
Some action in this chapter! This story is very good!
| GingeRael chapter 4 . 12/1/2014
Your main character is very likable which again, is hard to pull off. I like your story and I think it is an interesting turn on revenge sort of stories. Again, more detail can be added, but Im still really enjoying your story!
| GingeRael chapter 3 . 12/1/2014
Normally, I hate the girl characters when there is an implied romantic interest inbetween the protagonist and the love interest, but she is likable so far! Keep up the good work!
| GingeRael chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
| GingeRael chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Well this is absolutely tramautizing to imagine! I like stories that are from a child's point of view, so Im happy you did just that. More detail would be a nice addition and remember to put a , before a ". For example, '"[l]ets see you smile," he said almost in a whisper,' should be '"[l]ets see you smile," he said almost in a whisper. Even so, I think you have the makings of a good story!