Reviews for the smiling bandit
GingeRael chapter 7 . 12/1/2014
Hope you keep updating this!
GingeRael chapter 6 . 12/1/2014
Does Jeffery remind you of a western sort of Robin Hood? He does for me lol.
GingeRael chapter 5 . 12/1/2014
Some action in this chapter! This story is very good!
GingeRael chapter 4 . 12/1/2014
Your main character is very likable which again, is hard to pull off. I like your story and I think it is an interesting turn on revenge sort of stories. Again, more detail can be added, but Im still really enjoying your story!
GingeRael chapter 3 . 12/1/2014
Normally, I hate the girl characters when there is an implied romantic interest inbetween the protagonist and the love interest, but she is likable so far! Keep up the good work!
GingeRael chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
Great chapter!
GingeRael chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Well this is absolutely tramautizing to imagine! I like stories that are from a child's point of view, so Im happy you did just that. More detail would be a nice addition and remember to put a , before a ". For example, '"[l]ets see you smile," he said almost in a whisper,' should be '"[l]ets see you smile," he said almost in a whisper. Even so, I think you have the makings of a good story!