|Reviews for Rumours|
| Vitzy chapter 4 . 5/11/2014
Its good. I like the dialogue, its got a very London feel to it.
In plays, because its not a novel, we don't get to see what the people are doing/thinking/look like. The only clues we have are from the dialogue itself.
You've included some description of actions but don't be shy to give descriptions, set the scene and perhaps even facial expressions. The whole point of a play is to give the actor/reader an idea of how to interpret the information.
Keep at it and read plenty of plays. Try Henkrik Ibsen...his writing style is lovely.