Reviews for The Cadence Chronicles
My21Heartbeats chapter 2 . 9/29/2014
When I read the description I kind of envisioned Batman and how his parents died. You took steps down that same road and yet ended up a little differently, which I commend you for. Good chapter.
My21Heartbeats chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
There were a few things that confused me at first but then I figured them out and was able to understand what you meant. You have a lot of dialogue for the characters at times without much interaction with the world. They somewhat seem like small monologues at time; that may be a stylistic choice that you make, and if it is, then it works great. If its not, however, then reading a lot of text from one character in one block can make the story seem sort of dense. Overall though, it was great!