Oh my God! Who is it!?

I've been at this for the past two days - just reading and guzzling your magical world with this unquenchable thirst. I'd like to say your Rule To series is a mix of Aeon Flux meets The Mocking Jay, but the truth is it's much more than that. There's this darkness in Elizabeth that's very queer - and at the same time, you give us insight into her world and her fears that makes her all the more relatable to the reader. She isn't just some cold hearted assassin, she's strong and courageous and will just do about anything for the people she cares for. Your other characters too, break the stereotype. They're not all flowers and rainbows - they've all been broken and touched by this war, touched by each others actions.

I'm glad in a way you've kept Ethan away. It just makes me think the reunion will be all the more sweeter - but I can't guarantee that the both of them will still be the same people... And that's what makes this wonderful and so true to life. Life happens and people change - and when it's something as big as war and death and rebellion, of course their feelings are going to remain unchanged. I do hope though, that not all is changed... That they can still be a boy and a girl, and pretend just for a moment that all is good in the world.

Super excited to read more! Can't wait till we see more about the prison fights, the Gifted, and when Adrian finally realises Elizabeth is right under his nose. You've spun quite a tale here and I truly cannot wait to read more. Update soon x

When jayden asked Elizabeth if she'll kill anyone? She replied 'anyone' while twisting a ring on her finger. Does that mean that she's uncertain, unsure if she really will? Her emotions have greatly changed since book 1. I have a feeling that there'll be some sort of cliffhanger next chap? I hope you will update soon.

Love love love this story! I can't wait for your next updates!

I've just read straight through Rules to Die By and then as far as you've written this. It is so good. I was gutted when I realised this one hadn't been finished yet. You are a fantastic author, please keep it up :)

Great as usual! Can't wait for the next one!

My errors are:

Is it Fin or Finn? Since you do this in Word, it'll be easy to look for and fix.

Not sure where a little more than 3/4 through, "and I feel a little of Gift flowing in me," my gift... not sure but that makes sense.

Great work!

This is the greatest story of all time. Just thought you should know that.

Wow, Wow! I really wish I could write action scenes like you do! They are just so well done! I thought that someone was going to die in this chapter, but I am so happy that they didn't. I am very interested about the next chapter. I do like to read fight scenes and I am sure that yours will be good! Great work and I am looking forward to more!

Review time!
Thank you for not making Elizabeth and John kill each other. I'm not sure how much my poor heart could handle. It never struck me how well John can fight. Guess I just never thought about it...either way, it was nice to see him in action.
It was quite SHOCKING to find out Jayden was a gifted. Lol sorry-that pun was re-VOLT-ing. I don't know WATT came over me.
Elizabeth's gift is so weird. How is it that her gift is so deviant, having two strands seemingly woven together? Also, might this grant her some kind of immunity to the gifted-killing virus? Just a thought. I don't know how the virus works, nor do I know fine details about her gift, so it's hard to make a prediction just yet.
Gasp! Patrick! Noooo! He can't die here. Can he? He can't. Not yet. Not like this. I think there's a good chance he'll die sometime in the story considering the way things seem to be going, but his death will hit Elizabeth in a different way (Note: I DO NOT want Pat to die, but I can't stop a story). The idea of Patrick just...exploding because Elizabeth looked dead makes my heart huuurt. In a goooood wayyyyy. This scene really touched me. We know how much electricity it takes to even get Elizabeth ON HER KNEES. The idea of Patrick freaking out so hard they had to literally FRY HIS BRAIN to make him STOP is insane. And Elizabeth immediately thinks of HIS rules when she panics, NOT her Master's. Very telling. And she openly accepts the fact that he is SO important to her, without hesitation or even a second thought. I often wonder about Patrick's journey as an assassin, and if he deeply relates to Elizabeth's sorrow. I hope we get more details regarding Patrick's history (and Nick's) in the future. Because the past can shed light on the present and shape the future. (Also, is Finn our new Tyler? He just strikes me as that innocent-loving type.)
Ah, nothing like a relaxing prison brawl to take the tension off that last scene. Seeing Elizabeth slam-kick a guy's nuts up into his lower intestines is such a wonderful pick-me-up. And I love how she broke that one guy's leg. Because they broke John's leg. Elizabeth got revenge. Nice touch.
Poor Jared just keeps getting shut down again and again. Give the poor guy a chance to open his sassy mouth.
She remembered another one of Patrick's rules!
I think it's safe to say Jayden's crushin' on Lizzie-or at the very least, he is deeply intrigued. But I don't think you purr someone's name like that if you're just curious about them. Unless maybe you're Adrian. It depends...
So that's it. Elizabeth will kill anyone who stands in the way of her revenge.
But not literally ANYONE, right Elizabeth?
Right...?
-AAA gifted battles next chapter! Hallelujah! I can't wait! When does Adrian get here? When will Patrick wake up? (he can't die yet).
Good chapter. They all are. May you feel inspired as you continue to write

This was great! I loved all the action you've written. Elizabeth's starting to soften amd that makes me proud of her.

I can't wait for Adrian to meet Elizabeth in Preydexco. Hope you update soon! :)

Okay, everyone tells Elizabeth that it was the president who killed her parents, but what if it was patrick, he was the asassin, wasn't he. Maybe his brother ordered him to kill Elizabeth's parents?

Loving this series, am very excited to read how it continues from here! :)

Geez, Prez doesn't look so good. Was his relationship with Elizabeth really that deep? That's...quite precious, actually. Come to think of it, they did walk together a lot, didn't they? Cute how the interrogators/assassins get along (Prez and Elizabeth, Adrian and Pat). Interesting to see Prez thinking about Patrick again. It's gonna be awkward if (*cough cough* WHEN) they see each other again. They could have coffee. Talk about what they've been up to the past few years. In fact, all of them should go out for coffee. (Except Adrian can't sit next to Elizabeth because we all know he couldn't keep it in his pants.)
WAITWAITWAitwaitwait Hooooold up. Nick and Rick have been stalking Elizabeth since she was like 3? All because she had a neat gift? MAN these guys are DETERMINED. GEEZ. Geez. This chapter is overwhelming. I need to breathe. Why was Elizabeth's family travelling across Sector 2? Does this mean Elizabeth's gift is a fear response? Has it always been tied to her emotions like this?
I've been wondering about Grandpa Kaiser - the guy who raised Nick and Rick. What kind of dude was HE? Did he have a partner too, or were Nick and Rick the first pair of assassins/interrogators? Also, when did he kick the bucket? Or is he still alive? I assume he's dead...
I swear everyone in this bloodline is crazy.
Ooooog these flashbacks make me cringe. Elizabeth was really motivated from the start, wasn't she? Adrian is becoming such a deep character and I'm beginning to accept him as a person, but I swear if he punches Elizabeth one more time...
Okay, creepy information about the bioweapon. This could mean significant challenges for our heroes in the future...
Hah! 'She left you!' Son, Elizabeth was never there in the FIRST place. Adrian's mom knows what's up. She just earned a lot of points in my book.
ADRIAN YOU LITTLE SLUT GET YOUR CREEPY HANDS OFF THIS RANDOM CHICK I KNEW YOU WERE WIERD BUT THIS IS JUST CROSSING THE LINE. YOU'RE OVER HERE SMOTHERING THIS LADY AND AS FAR AS WE KNOW ELIZABETH HASN'T EVEN HAD 'THE TALK' YET. GOOD GRIEF CHILD KEEP IT IN YOUR PANTS.
(in response to the actors you sent me): AAAAAAAAA it's everything I'd ever dreamed! The Prez is literally Scar from the Lion King. And I can't even BEGIN to describe how I feel about Patrick's casting. Sheer perfection. Be still my heart.

Very good as usual, can't wait for the next one