Reviews for Lust Relief Dorm |
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![]() ![]() Will you write about Grimoire too? But your books on Amazon have pictures? |
![]() ![]() This whole series is so hot! |
![]() ![]() I absolutely loved your imagination Kristy, this was an amazing read, please write a sequel! |
![]() ![]() This just made me come twice. |
![]() ![]() So it is over. |
![]() ![]() can you please make them pregnant? |
![]() ![]() lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's alright, but some advice would be to work on dialogue. It sounds like something from a porno which is rather unrealistic, and it's a bit cheesy really. Also, no condoms? I mean, practically every girl is pregnant at this point. I don't know, maybe you were just going for a porno and it doesn't really matter about plot or really anything, but I think if you weren't going for that, then you might want to rethink it. |
![]() ![]() DAY-UM! :) You have an amazing talent. I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay this is great. I will check out your story on AMAZON now, and please while you're at it- check my story out "Blood from a Rose" I'd love to hear what you think. I'll follow you for more (: |
![]() ![]() Fantastic. :) |
![]() ![]() Definitely keep going. :) |
![]() ![]() This is really good. Keep going. :) |
![]() ![]() interesting start |