Reviews for Chasing Pavements
jeepers09 chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
I thought this was going to be the typical normal-girl-meets-famous-guy story. And I guess it was, but somehow you made it more. This was really well-written and drew me in big-time, and the characters seem so real and so NORMAL instead of the cliche smirking celebrity and the aloof fangirl who pretends she isn't. Like the other reviewer, I am now dismayed to realize that, yes, it's a one-shot. It's over. You do know, don't you, that this would make a great chapter one? (Hint.)

But even if you've said all you wanted to say and it remains a one-shot, I loved it.
Helen Cole chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
I LOVE this soo much! This simply CANNOT Just be a one shot. :) you have to write more! Please!

I can't even remember the last time I got into a story this much.

When her phone started ringing with that song, I just loved it! This is like every girls's dream come true and everything sounds realistic and the conversations seem so natural.

"THE chase Harrison" gets the point across, But is a little over used.

I feel like a little schoolgirl right now. Haha Please write more!
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