Reviews for Fimbulwinter
AcceleratorStrongestLv5 chapter 6 . 10/25/2022
Nice work
Darth Zannacross chapter 2 . 5/1/2022
The witches seem like they are not leading him into a trap so far...maybe they are just trolls...we will see. Marcus seems like he can either go full Hard-ass or mellow out in time...though hopefully it won't be the Ragnarok that makes him chill.

Well now...Daniel does seem to be having a good time for the most part but lets see how things turn from here.
Darth Zannacross chapter 1 . 4/30/2022
Curious what a Filmbuwinter is so...lets find out. We clearly are going for a magical kind of story.

Well a not so magical start with a two timing wife starting things off on a rather sour note.

We got Goblins...Loki, trolling magical ladies and a lot of other things to kick things off...lets see just what is really going on with Cerise and Avilla.
Starart152 chapter 1 . 4/29/2022
This is an interesting introduction to the story. Our main character Daniel went from another world as he answered a witch calling for his help. As the very beginning is telling, things will get rough for Daniel and makes him regret his decisions.
As for Cerise and Avilla, they are interesting together and aren't the nicest girls that lives on this world.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2019
Haha for science indeed.

If I were him, I'd probably create a few redundant enchantments like his amulet. Bracers and anklets, greaves. Maybe a belt. Redundancies and things less easily removed.

Some for the girls too, probably.
mr.forser chapter 6 . 7/28/2016
Nice story so far, but I think it has too much action.
Jeff091 chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
yes i read that and bought the book, to cite another comment:
a bit too much teen-aged wish fulfillment,
it gets worse before it gets better (with the amount of sex)

don't regret "buying" (Amazon kindleunlimited) it, don't regret reading it
Guest chapter 6 . 11/12/2015
Will Gaia's new daughter get mutant powers from radiation exposure? It seems unlikely that she will be stillborn. Maybe Daniel will have to repair the DNA damaged in utero by copying some of his own.
The Unicorn chapter 6 . 8/9/2015
Very interesting story, a bit too much teen-aged wish fulfillment but the characters and plot are interesting.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/16/2015
Considering buying the book.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/16/2015
Well, that went HBO.
Then again, it was going there the whole time, so I can't really complain.
As long as it doesn't go Anita Blake.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2015
Okay. This story is good. Probably better than the other one, so I guess it's okay if you focus on this, instead.
Scygnus chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
Oh hey! You wrote this!? I bought both books from the kindle store for something to read at work a few days ago. And I read your stuff on a long time ago, but I didn't realize it was you until someone linked this page.

So, a general review, since I've already read both books: It's a pretty fun story, can't wait for more. Favorite moment so far: "Oh hai Bast." I could say more but that might be too much spoiler for here.
deccan chapter 6 . 4/8/2015
Not bad, though Time Braid seems better written. My main complaint is that this feels too much like a standard male wish fulfillment fantasy. By the way, I went to Amazon to check out the full book, but it seems it isn't currently available for sale? It's possible that it's just not available in my country (Malaysia).
Sum1 chapter 6 . 4/6/2015
Great work! Three dollars for the full story is definitely worth it
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