Reviews for ESPers
Coen Wong chapter 2 . 8/22/2014
I think you convey your ideas quite well:)
Needless chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
This looks interesting, but you need to proofread a bit more. For example, "It does probably have been years"; "Feel secured" should be "Feeling secured". Additionally, you interchange between past and present tense, and should stick with one tense.