|Reviews for My Task|
| Unxious Custard chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Hi, I enjoyed this, but would have liked a little more clarification on what is going to happen next. It felt to me like the character is about to commit murder, and is perhaps mad with voices in his/her head. The cup then is just a potion of false bravado, and the world goes dark as the potion kicks in. If the cup is more literal, and the story is meant as suicide, then what is the future which seems to be waiting beyond the cup? How sad if it is just madness, leading to death with nothing beyond.
I do hope you will return the review with a review of my story, Psychics v Terrorists, which is a modern fantasy set in England. Good luck with the writing.