Reviews for Pretenses and Promises
Fawn chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
I've read this one shot a million times and never reviewed so I just wanted to tell you that it is totally amazing and a great piece of fiction!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
This was lovely. The characters were very real and I like the progression of the story. You have a knack for making a romance so beautiful :')
Fiery Dancer chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
Loved this one-shot, very nicely written and I loved how you portrayed Gia and Kaiden :)
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
I really did like this Star Crossed entry a lot. It's so different and much darker than a lot of the other entries that I have read. I like your characters and the atmosphere you have created with this one shot. It's very one of those stories that just seems to stick out in your mind. Great work!
Julietish chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Hello, it’s Juliet from ADoR! Thanks for participating in Star-Cross’d this round. First of all, the cover for your story is absolutely eye-catching. Your characters were dynamic and had a passionate, undeniable chemistry. Your descriptions contribute so well to the depth of Gia and Kaiden’s relationship. There’s only a couple of typos I found—in the sentence that says “She didn’t have the hear to take the ones without him in it,” the word ‘hear’ should be ‘heart’. The second one is towards the end, when ‘loosing’ is used instead of ‘losing’. I hope you find future rounds of SC inspiring!
frouwe chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
I liked this a lot. You were really good at showing how much they cared about each other and how much that scared them. (Though it did bother me in the last part that you kept using 'loose' - as in not tight - instead of 'lose' - as in stop having).
shinju asuka chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Wow... Love how you write the story, especially the prologue part! This is first story of yours i read. I'll read another!
Carmel March chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
I absolutely loved this. Your writing was great, almost poetic at times, which I love. I enjoyed these two characters so much. I love characters with flaws and problems but somehow manage to work things out. Great story, thank you so much for sharing! :)
meetam chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Wow. Ok. Wow.
This was heart-wrenchingly beautiful. It TOUCHED MY HEART. Oh my gosh there were so many feels in every single moment. I read it so slowly because EVERY word was so precious.