Reviews for Sea Foam
TheHungryCaterpillar chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
I love your writing!
luluhunnie chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
interesting take on what happens during a sea foam's life! in the original, which I read a couple hundred times haha, the Little Mermaid rose to the heavens or somewhere because of her good heart :)))) but that wouldn't work for your story! anywho, the introduction with her living out as sea foam was really interesting that she was still allowed sight and thoughts and all haha! it was great that she finally got poured out so she can go back to the prince! oh but he was still married in the original so I hope you addressed that :))) and one last thing, I really thought the names were interesting with Adva being foreign and Peter being, well, human haha! so I'm gonna catch up now :D
InkedGirl chapter 6 . 5/26/2014
Once again wonderful writing. They're adorable!
InkedGirl chapter 5 . 5/25/2014
I like your characterization of Stefan. Very realistic and unique. Usually the younger brother wants all the power or is jealous of the older brother. It's great to see another version of the story where the younger brother is rational and really isn't out for power, but instead is looking for what's best for the kingdom.
InkedGirl chapter 3 . 5/25/2014
Great chapter. You may have inspired me to continue writing myself.
InkedGirl chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Interesting, wonderfully written first chapter. I'll definitely be reading more!