Awesome story am looking forward too see how this story plays out . Simon doesn't play nice and is really rude too kyle .shame he waited so long to find his soul mate only too find he's a jackass , he can't stand. Fate has a way of bringing total opposites together . Would love too read more ...

like the plot :) good to see where this goes.

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I love this story already, especially Cassie.

I was so happy to see that you'd updated this story! I like Cassie lots, and enjoy her relationship with Kyle so far. Curious to read the more angsty bits you've promised...Keep up some solid writing! :)

Ooooo can't wait for more : ) keep up the great writing

I love it! You made the characters so lovable, yet there's a nice twang of angst in there with the parents and Simon's jackassery!

Tempting fate will only make it worse! Lol it's really good story so far so please update

I think this will be a good story! Hope to see you update soon!

I love this. :) Kyle is already so likeable - which is awesome. It definitely comes across that he's a bit lonely, in how you have him interact with Aidan, and with how he discusses his family. (As a side note, I'm curious to know more about his family). My opinion of Sophie so far is that she is neither "hateable" nor particularly likeable...she seems to serve as a reminder, though, that Aidan has other friends while Kyle only has Aidan...Sophie might become easy to resent if she doesn't have at least one endearing quality...

Anyways, keep up the fantastic work! Simon seems like such an ass...I'm so curious to know how this is going to play out.

Nice start. I'm excited to see what you're going to do with this...