Reviews for Moonlight Wing Chronicles
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 19 . 6/15/2014
What prophecy?
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 18 . 6/15/2014
Review for both...

TWO THUMBS UP!
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 16 . 6/13/2014
I am now caught up with the chapters after re-logging in...

All three chapters are good... *blushes at the third chapter*

I love the outfits...
Everfew chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
In the summary, you write 'change form'. It should be 'changes form', considering it is ONE race, not several.

Same goes for Azothians. You say 'the race know as', and then it should be in singular form, with Azothian (unless singular form has an 's' at the end).

Having a well-written summary is a good way to have many readers, so try and correct it as fast as possible.
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 13 . 6/11/2014
I hope they do get allies...
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 12 . 6/10/2014
You're welcome and this chapter was good; already at Part 3...

Keep rocking, rolling and writing!
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 11 . 6/10/2014
I like the Tournament Final; I liked the weapons too...

Tenebrae means Darkness (Rin Darkness) Nice...
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 10 . 6/9/2014
Can't wait for the Finals...
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 9 . 6/9/2014
Round Two wasn't long...

But the rest was great!
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 8 . 6/8/2014
I like the King's Cross Tournament; it is a nice touch...
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 7 . 6/8/2014
Things are getting interesting and heating up...
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 6 . 6/7/2014
This is getting very good...
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 5 . 6/7/2014
I like the herb lore and the battles that was good...
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
I like the castle and the reason that the soul is powerful...
C. M. Brighid Bachleda chapter 3 . 6/7/2014
I like the spirit swords and the gods; a whole new mythology...
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