|Reviews for Biting Bullets|
| Mikealfaxray chapter 1 . 5/29/2017
Saw the author's note at the end of ch21 just after reviewing. I don't know if I have much feedback. I was able to finish the story in a few days, meaning I was hooked. If you do go editing and cutting minor characters, I don't think Oliver should be cut, since it would cut out a small plot point. Oliver decided to "poison" Ira without hesitation and Sey fessed up, which made Ira decide to trust him (even though Ira already knew maybe trusted Sey but we don't know that at that point). Anyways... yeah. That's just my two cents though.
| Mikealfaxray chapter 21 . 5/29/2017
Ohmygooooddd. Wow. I'm in love with this story. It's tragically beautiful and extremely well written. oh geez. I loved the characters. They were quirky, flawed, psychotic, yet lovable. Loved that Ira wasn't ever depicted as perfect, and that Sey realized just how messed up Ira (and himself) was. I loved the happy ending too. It could've ended as tragic but it didn't and I'm so glad it didn't. I'd probably be super sad for a few days.
Anywho, loved it and I think I'll read your other works (if u have more)
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/27/2017
Just reread this. Still love it just as much as I did when I first read it, fuck... 2 years ago? I love the way you write and this fucked up little future world you've created. But most of all I love the characters. I still think about silly little Seymour and Ira and everyone else every once and a while. Thank you so much for this story, I'm so glad I found it 3
| SlashLover chapter 21 . 3/30/2016
Christ. Even more tears.
That was a fantastic story. Dark, sad, hilarious, bittersweet. It left me feeling sad, but satisfied. These 2 just have to struggle for everything.
And Arlo. Fuck, what a raging douche nozzle he is. He's worse than all the rest of the Bieris combined. This story really is a testament to how fucked up mankind is as a species. Ugh.
Thanks so much for sharing this story. I'm now off to read your others. You're a magnificent writer and I look forward to reading your other works and re-reading this one in time.
| SlashLover chapter 19 . 3/30/2016
Oh fuck I cried a ton in this chapter.
Their "first date" and "first kiss" were so amazingly bittersweet and so perfectly heartbreaking. The agony Ira must feel knowing how different those 8 years could have gone. "There but for the flip of a coin go we."
I love this story.
| SlashLover chapter 15 . 3/30/2016
Awwwww. Seymour did so much for little Ira way back when.
| SlashLover chapter 12 . 3/29/2016
Dun-dun-duuunnnnn (old movie mystery sound)
I'm so confused. I know this will sort itself out eventually. For now I'm just hanging on for the ride.
| SlashLover chapter 11 . 3/29/2016
"Either I fainted, or his skills at getting people into bed is literally magical. " Hahahahahhahahahaha.
| SlashLover chapter 10 . 3/29/2016
"...go home and eat wall plaster and wear pyjamas." lol
"I'm talking about penises"
This got dark at the end of this chapter. Yikes. Gang war ahead.
| SlashLover chapter 5 . 3/29/2016
Oh, Christ. Comic gold:
"-necklace of trophy penises"
"...What the hell is the matter with you?" "Where to start."
| SlashLover chapter 4 . 3/29/2016
OMG how have I missed this comedy masterpiece? I've read hundreds upon hundreds of slash stories on FP and I've never encountered this one
The chalk snorting scene in this chapter sent me into hysterics and I cried laughter tears until my stomach was sore. Just fucking awesome.
| Dragoonfly chapter 21 . 12/9/2015
Oh my goodness this was the best story I've read on this website. The haracters were all loveable, developed and distinct. Your descriptions and story telling made me feel immersed constantly. Thank you so much!
| tiredly chapter 21 . 10/11/2015
| Guest chapter 21 . 9/6/2015
This entire story had me feeling some type of way. So beautifully written, like poetry but not. im going to remember this story for a long time.
| A-Collins chapter 11 . 9/3/2015
"And we fall asleep under the star". That line makes me laugh every time I read this. That poor, lone star.