Reviews for A Little Girl's Secret
doors down chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Interesting idea, but it needs more detail. Flush out the characters a bit more. Make me care that the boy died.
Glacia the Icy Mega Absol chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
The only issue I have is that you said the boy died, but then in the next sentence, you said he was just unconscious...
Other than that, it's pretty good. I think this story will be imteresting!