Reviews for A Stagnation of Love (rewrite) |
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![]() ![]() Not to mention, why is is MOTHER aware of what is going on and not immediately making moves to get her child out of that situation? Why is she depicted as still being a loyal wife to him and even Frey is commenting about how his mother still loves him? Also, how are you 2 million words in and your main character is still in that horrible house? Please... |
![]() ![]() So, I feel the need to put something here. I couldn't bring myself to read your story. I'm sorry. If it was just regular child abuse where Frey's father just hit him and all that, I would have made it through the first few chapters but I couldn't. It got triggering for me and honestly, the way it is described is far too brutal. I don't even know if I will be able to sleep tonight after skipping a few chapters ahead and happened to come across a rape scene where he imagined Josh the entire time. It was too much for me. You are a great writer, but, fuck, that was far too much... |
![]() ![]() ![]() you such a great writer, i am interested with your work, i am an editor from fast growing platform, i would love to offer you something related to your work, may i know how to reach you professionally? |
![]() ![]() I cannot express how much I love your writing as an author, I am so invested in Frey and his story and I'm so glad that this is still being updated! I feel really sad for Frey and Josh, I wish they would get back to being friends! Brilliant writing! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() I'm so sorry to hear that! :( This year has been rough. It's ok to take some time to care for your mental health! It's very important that you take care of yourself The story is a phenomenal and in-depth emotional roller coaster as always! Beautifully written and polished. Stay safe! All us fans will be rooting for your success and health! ( ‿ ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished this chapter and I have no words. Really emotional for me. You convey his pain so intricately that my heart is hurting. Will probably give a more thorough review when I can gather my feelings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been forever since I logged in, but I've been keeping track of it with every single update. I logged in just to comment, because this is a masterpiece. It's beautiful, in a tragic way. Not primarily beautiful in a rose-looking way, but more of a sad-beautiful. It's raw, it's real, and it's such an accurate representation of mental illness, trauma, and relapses. Anger. Distress. All of it is just written in such a way that resonates and makes it feel real. Makes you feel like Frey. It sucks you in and makes you part of the story, part of the situation. It's so unfiltered and that's what makes it so, so stunning and honestly, legendary. Nobody else could have written something so heart-wrenching and tragic and made it so beautiful and in-depth. Every time I read, I'm honestly shocked at how professional and extensive it is. There is so much detail that I can't even begin to describe even a fraction of it. It's a powerful story that really grabs people. You are, by far, my absolute favorite author because you are touching on "taboo" topics and turning it into something that doesn't demean the brutality of them while also not glorifying them. I just... I could go on for days and days about how rich this story is. I think I have been here since around 40 chapters, and it has been the best story in my life. I am so, so grateful for your work. Thank you so much for always providing us with the best content. Every time I get an update in my email, I get all giddy and happy and then have to prepare myself mentally LOL. I hope you are staying safe in this pandemic. Thanks so much again for this story and chapter! Take as much time as you need to write, good things are worth waiting for. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So emotionally invested into this story which just goes to show what a brilliant writer you are. Eagerly awaiting to read more. Best wishes x |
![]() ![]() Hey I don't know if you're still writing this but I thought I should let you know that I literally check my emails once a week to see if this story is updated because I love it so much. So great job and know you've got a lot of readers on your side! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() For once, I would LOVE to see Wren get a taste of his medicine. Out of everybody in the story, he irritates me the most. Just plain evil. On the other hand, I eagerly await the next chapter, long or short. Good job and Keep writing! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I don't know if you're still writing this story, but I just wanted to tell you that you still have me as an eager reader! I absolutely love this story and I've basically grown up with it considering I started reading it when I was around 15 and now in a few days I'm going to be 18! Thank you so much for writing this and allowing me to enjoy it so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No need to apologize for anything. The waiting gives me time to clean up all the tears off my pillow. I'm sorry for your situation and wish good times ahead of you. Now, I must retrieve another pillow after this heartbreaking chapter. Keep up the great work! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow thank you so so much! This was great! I can't believe how addicted I am to this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() THANK YOU SO MUCH! Honestly, sometimes I wonder if I'm addicted to this story. I guess I am because I literally jumped for joy when I saw this was updated. Seriously, thank you so much for writing this because... it's BEAUTIFUL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch... Just... ouch... The ending almost hurt me physically... I have no words other than I'm extremely eager for the next one. Take your time ;) |