Reviews for A Stagnation of Love (rewrite)
raywolfshibelt chapter 19 . 4/21/2015
Hi! This story is really something and I'm so hooked so I hope you write more and update soon. This chapter is kind of intense and I want to read more. Your writing is just awesome. Oh, and I read the 1st version, and feel like it's totally different person who wrote it. Not just the obvious difference. It's just not as good as this and I don't get the feel like on this one. Sorry, just thought I'll let you know. This version is actually more real. And sorry if my English is wierd. Also I'm not very good with words...
angst-lover chapter 18 . 4/9/2015
oh my god. 18 chapters of pure hell for Frey... I believe you broken the record for longest ongoing angst. (and I love it!)

I'm seriously hoping he's going to be getting some much deserved comforting soon!
Guest chapter 15 . 4/9/2015
I really love this, the writing is so incredibly real and full of emotion

...but I'll admit I literally spend every chapter waiting to see when the summary is finally going to kick in. :P WHEN IS HE GOING TO MEET SOREN'S BF?!
Guest21 chapter 16 . 3/17/2015
Powerful story! Your writing of Nate's suicide was breathtakingly good - I was just there hoping it wouldn't happen. I'd also like to add that the grammar and punctuation in your story is very good; you've definitely put a lot of effort into it.
Cherri101 chapter 15 . 3/3/2015
awew great story but i feel so sad
Guest chapter 13 . 12/28/2014
What can I say about this story? I fell utterly snagged of words. I am so attached to these characters. I can only speak in simple sentences. Wow. This is a horribly beautiful and terrible story, and I mean that in the best possible way. Keep writing!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/16/2014
Ooh, I'm liking this a lot! Can't wait to see where you take it
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