Reviews for A Stagnation of Love (rewrite) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Not gonna lie, binge read both chapters. Poor Frey. I wish Justin would offer to take him and his mom in and call the cops on that rat bastard of a father. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! I've got to be honest, this chapter had my blood boiling in several places (namely Frey's worse-than-trash father and those subhumans he goes to school with), but those kinds of stories are always the good ones. You know just how to evoke the emotions within people with your writing! Keep up the good work as always! ;) |
![]() ![]() Ahhh, you made me cry at the scene with Frey, his mother, his father, and the bathroom! This story goes into so much depth and never leaves anything out regarding details! I think that's what makes it so emotional. You don't just write a part, you paint a scenario vividly and it puts the reader in the character's spot. Amazing as always! And congratulations on finishing Nanowrimo! I followed along with twitter! |
![]() ![]() AHH YOU UPDATED AS I WAS AWAY FOR 8 DAAAYS! Oh but it's still so good, and poor Frey! Such a good chapter, just like always! Looking forward to the next one! |
![]() ![]() I missed the story! You haven't posted in a long while and I began to worry! It was a painful part, really hard to read. I feel that I have to digest it and its going to take me a while before I can hope to express all the emotions storming inside of me right now. I'm just going to say that I continue to adore your characters and can't wait to read more of this wonderful creation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Scratch that. Frey's father is worse. ( I can't wait for Frey to fight back or something... I feel like I could explode! Good chapter as always! ;) |
![]() ![]() The last part was so deep and written so well that it actually affected my mood through the days I spent reading it. It was super long but I must admit that I really like it, it makes me focus on the story for more than the typicall two hour time it takes me to read updates of other stories. Thank you for posting! You're doing a really good job ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, long chapter! In all the stories w/ school scenes in them, I've never loathed a parasitic character such as Wren Parker, probably more than Frey's father or his other bullies. Sad how people like him actually exist. There's practically no revenge scenario that'll be enough for what he's done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your killing me with this fic! It's so sad. Can't wait for frey's secret to be reveal. I want him to be happy :,( |
![]() ![]() I screeched when I saw that you said it was updated on twitter. Boy, did I SCREECH. Every chapter gets me so excited, and I'm never let down. It's like you always top your previous chapter. I'll admit, I do come to each chapter having expectations, higher than the last. But you know what? You keep excelling. I hope you plan on publishing this at some point, because you best know that I'd buy a hundred copies just so I can read it a hundred times over. I've already read through chapters 1-65 four times while waiting for 66! This story will never get old to me. It's timeless and beautiful, and really real. Keep writing, forever and always! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cried... Again. Seriously I want Frey to be happy! Please let him be happy one day. His life is sooooooo sad it makes me mad. Can't wait for an other chapter but I'm also so scaree for him :( |
![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. Wow. W. O. W. I can't stop exclaiming! This is really good. If I were you, I would try self-publishing. I know how to do that sort of thing and have already published, so if you have any questions, etc, just hit me up. :) |
![]() ![]() Ahhh, such a good chapter o You beautiful author, you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another splendid chapter! Thank you for this! ;) Although, I did freak out a little over the date. I thought the story fast forwarded 9 or whatever years. |
![]() ![]() Aye, aye, aye! Another awesome chapter! And that's ok about the editing thing, just thought I'd throw it out there in case it would be of any help xD Your story is absolutely amazing. Every time it uploads, I get so excited and literally drop anything just to read it. You are by far my favorite author EVER. |